One Dark Night

In Johnny's car
  Freedom's found
The place he loves
  to fool around

The tires almost bald
  A floorboard's missing
The engine sputters and stalls
  Leaves him more time for kissing

So Johnny makes out with his dates
  Chugs much too much beer
Weaves all the way home
  Struggles to steer

Prays his old woody
  into a tight garage space
Johnny's vision's blurred
  There's fear on his face

When one dark night
  his car doesn't steer right ~
Garage now collapsed
  Freedom plays taps
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Ermine Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:43 PM
Your warning poem has good interest in it. Last line 'freedom plays taps' - like a tap turned off.? I wanted ' freedom lays traps', - then my brain blocked up!
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