This is an alternate rhyme scheme A,C,B,D. It may be a Mesodiplosis: the repetition of a word in the middle of a line or clause.
Tonight I am pulling out a box of pictures Lookin’ at’em one by one As I am sippin’ on my elixir I reminisce about the day we begun Tonight we’re having a get together They’ll arrive one by one We’ll be sippin’ on our favorite beverage And we’ll be missin’ one Tonight after saying goodbye to you We’ll be missin’ you separately Some will cry some will sigh, some will just do We’ll be missin’ you desperately As leaves blow over and time ages And one by one the years go past We all have grieved in different stages And the pain has left at last We’ll find you in a gallery of memories Where we’ll think of you a lot One by one each prayer, we’ll share Our most intimate thoughts with God
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