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. Soar Blackbird high Above in Cobalt Blue sky Play a game of catch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/14/2010 10:20:00 AM
Hey Sara, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy your win! ....Jimmy
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Date: 4/13/2010 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations! Great write!
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:04:00 AM
Sara, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:45:00 AM
Congratulations on being in the winner circle, Sara! Cobalt is a great word! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/10/2010 7:39:00 PM
enjoyed, congrats on the hm!!
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:56:00 PM
I like this. It sounds playful with vivid imagry to go along with the fun. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:44:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest... an excellent write and win ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:35:00 PM
Awesome haiku, Sara. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2010 12:28:00 PM
Such a playful take on that picture, enjoyed this haiku very much Sara! & you're so right! I definitely didn't notice the time, this is my absolute last post before I sleep ;) I swear the rooster's are crowing already! enjoy your day! & thanks for all your comments :)
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Date: 4/9/2010 12:28:00 PM
super last---congrats on your win with this one btw :)
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Date: 4/9/2010 11:07:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/8/2010 12:54:00 PM
Well this is a wonderful entry for Raul's new contest... fits the photo perfectly from what I can see ... my entry is "Flight".. what else? luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/8/2010 12:39:00 PM
enjoyed today.
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Date: 4/8/2010 10:56:00 AM
Hey Sara, Thnx for reading and leaving comments on my work....means a lot to me..Jimmy
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Date: 4/8/2010 10:02:00 AM
Good write here my poetic friend... How you been?....:JP]
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Date: 4/8/2010 8:18:00 AM
nice one
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