One Bug

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                                                Soar Blackbird high
                                            Above in Cobalt Blue sky
                                               Play a game of catch

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Jimmy Anderson

April 14, 2010 at 10:20 AM

Hey Sara, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy your win! ....Jimmy

Rachel W

April 13, 2010 at 6:33 PM

Congratulations! Great write!

James Fraser

April 11, 2010 at 6:04 AM

Sara, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2010 at 12:45 AM

Congratulations on being in the winner circle, Sara! Cobalt is a great word! Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

April 10, 2010 at 7:39 PM

enjoyed, congrats on the hm!!

Steven Mossburg

April 9, 2010 at 6:56 PM

I like this. It sounds playful with vivid imagry to go along with the fun. Congratulations on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 9, 2010 at 2:44 PM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest... an excellent write and win ...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

April 9, 2010 at 2:35 PM

Awesome haiku, Sara. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 9, 2010 at 12:28 PM

Such a playful take on that picture, enjoyed this haiku very much Sara! & you're so right! I definitely didn't notice the time, this is my absolute last post before I sleep ;) I swear the rooster's are crowing already! enjoy your day! & thanks for all your comments :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 9, 2010 at 12:28 PM

super last---congrats on your win with this one btw :)

Raul Moreno

April 9, 2010 at 11:07 AM

Sara, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 8, 2010 at 12:54 PM

Well this is a wonderful entry for Raul's new contest... fits the photo perfectly from what I can see ... my entry is "Flight".. what else? luv.. Linda-Marie..