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12/28/2025 for Wonder of Souls Expression Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

One Brief, Unforgettable Moment

It was just a movie scene
with stars from the silver screen,
a teacher and a lady who
gazed into the Danube River,
and to the friend then with her
would, a revealing line, deliver, 
"But Flora dear, it's blue".
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Miller Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 1:06 AM
Intriguing David, what movie is this, oh and congratulations
Crandall Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 5:08 PM
It's the 1939 version of Goodbye, Mr. Chips with Robert Donat and Greer Garson. I thought it was a pretty good movie.
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December 29, 2025 at 10:12 AM
Your "One Brief, Unforgettable Moment" is a very creative write. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" I also did " ONE BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT." Hope You Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away...............
Crandall Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:18 PM
Thanks, Paula - Happy New Year!
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