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WONDER OF SOUL'S EXPRESSION Poetry Contest
3. ONE BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Written on December 28, 2025

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ONE BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT



Young, like the springtime sprouts
Edging toward the moment, softest hues
His eyes brilliant blue, without any doubts
My hands tremble and the stars were my muse
fingers on my cheek, tracing shaky routes
All I could think, how his touch could confuse
Can’t forget that moment - it still shouts!
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Daniel Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 10:52 PM
Sweet:)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 12:56 PM
What a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading. Great last line. "Good Luck" I also did "ONE BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT." Hope You Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away...........
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Very nice!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Hello Regina, I sense you will never forget that special moment. Hugs. /Darlene/
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