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One Breath, Two Breaths

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They fling, frisk and frolic across my mind one breath two breaths so on so forth They romp, revel and rollick enshrined one thought two thoughts so on so forth They jink, jovial and joyful light as air one idyll thought after another in my nest They bounce, beg, behold without a care perusing in my loft without a quest They mate, mesh and move into me one breath two breaths I let them flow They sit, settle and seduce me their free empty as a shell I yolk them, then let them go. September 16, 2021 Sponsor : John Lawless Contest Name: Idyll Thoughts

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/2/2021 2:17:00 PM

Mystic I love this! Beautiful write! one breath, two breath and so forth is very original and good!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2021 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your "One Breath, Two Breaths" is a creative story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day.....................

John Lawless

Date: 9/29/2021 7:04:00 PM

Yes, they are fleeting an impossible to corral. thanks for participating in the contest

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2021 6:07:00 PM

Great write, Mystic. thoughts one , two , three that sometimes never stop when you need to get rest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/17/2021 10:56:00 AM

I like the structure of the poem...and the message too.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/17/2021 4:26:00 AM

Dear Vie, lovely, a really enjoyable poem...Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2021 8:38:00 AM

Wish I haD some idyllic thoughts. Maybe my poems suffer because of this. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/17/2021 2:59:00 AM

Your poems do not suffer Victor they are full of thoughts, lol, thank you for stopping by :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2021 7:58:00 AM

Mystic, so beautifully penned and your chosen image is also lovely, I like this poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/17/2021 2:58:00 AM

Thankyou Constance, keep well :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/16/2021 4:34:00 AM

I love it! Awesome words. Wishing you a win. God bless you. Love, Gina

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/17/2021 2:58:00 AM

Thank you Gina for your visit, be well keep smiling :)