Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

One Breath, Two Breaths

They fling, frisk and frolic across my mind 
one breath two breaths so on so forth 
They romp, revel and rollick enshrined 
one thought two thoughts so on so forth 

They jink, jovial and joyful light as air 
one idyll thought after another in my nest  
They bounce, beg, behold without a care  
perusing in my loft without a quest 

They mate, mesh and move into me 
one breath two breaths I let them flow 
They sit, settle and seduce me their free 
empty as a shell I yolk them, then let them go.  

September 16, 2021 

Sponsor : John Lawless 
Contest Name: Idyll Thoughts

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Krish Radhakrishna October 2, 2021 at 2:17 PM Mystic I love this! Beautiful write! one breath, two breath and so forth is very original and good!!

Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2021 at 12:06 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "One Breath, Two Breaths" is a creative story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day.....................

John Lawless September 29, 2021 at 7:04 PM Yes, they are fleeting an impossible to corral. thanks for participating in the contest

Eve Roper September 29, 2021 at 6:07 PM Great write, Mystic. thoughts one , two , three that sometimes never stop when you need to get rest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs

Arturo Michael September 17, 2021 at 10:56 AM I like the structure of the poem...and the message too.

Delice Arleen Skelly September 17, 2021 at 4:26 AM Dear Vie, lovely, a really enjoyable poem...Delice

Victor Buhagiar September 16, 2021 at 8:38 AM Wish I haD some idyllic thoughts. Maybe my poems suffer because of this. Hugs. Mystic Rose Rose September 17, 2021 at 2:59 AM Your poems do not suffer Victor they are full of thoughts, lol, thank you for stopping by :)

Constance La France September 16, 2021 at 7:58 AM Mystic, so beautifully penned and your chosen image is also lovely, I like this poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Mystic Rose Rose September 17, 2021 at 2:58 AM Thankyou Constance, keep well :)

Regina Mcintosh September 16, 2021 at 4:34 AM I love it! Awesome words. Wishing you a win. God bless you. Love, Gina Mystic Rose Rose September 17, 2021 at 2:58 AM Thank you Gina for your visit, be well keep smiling :)