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One Breath, Two Breaths

They fling, frisk and frolic across my mind 
one breath two breaths so on so forth 
They romp, revel and rollick enshrined 
one thought two thoughts so on so forth 

They jink, jovial and joyful light as air 
one idyll thought after another in my nest  
They bounce, beg, behold without a care  
perusing in my loft without a quest 

They mate, mesh and move into me 
one breath two breaths I let them flow 
They sit, settle and seduce me their free 
empty as a shell I yolk them, then let them go.  

September 16, 2021 

Sponsor : John Lawless 
Contest Name: Idyll Thoughts

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Krish Radhakrishna Date: 10/2/2021 2:17:00 PM Mystic I love this! Beautiful write! one breath, two breath and so forth is very original and good!! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/30/2021 12:06:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "One Breath, Two Breaths" is a creative story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day..................... Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 9/29/2021 7:04:00 PM Yes, they are fleeting an impossible to corral. thanks for participating in the contest Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 9/29/2021 6:07:00 PM Great write, Mystic. thoughts one , two , three that sometimes never stop when you need to get rest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 9/17/2021 10:56:00 AM I like the structure of the poem...and the message too. Login to Reply

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 9/17/2021 4:26:00 AM Dear Vie, lovely, a really enjoyable poem...Delice Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/16/2021 8:38:00 AM Wish I haD some idyllic thoughts. Maybe my poems suffer because of this. Hugs. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/17/2021 2:59:00 AM Your poems do not suffer Victor they are full of thoughts, lol, thank you for stopping by :)

Constance La France Date: 9/16/2021 7:58:00 AM Mystic, so beautifully penned and your chosen image is also lovely, I like this poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/17/2021 2:58:00 AM Thankyou Constance, keep well :)

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/16/2021 4:34:00 AM I love it! Awesome words. Wishing you a win. God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/17/2021 2:58:00 AM Thank you Gina for your visit, be well keep smiling :)