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One Awesome Heart

Fragile crystalline heart Broken now are your parts Thought you are that smart You've been wrong, You're not You are one enduring part If shattered no spare part Being careful a head start One awesome soft heart Let it go, don't depart Iron chains of pain Tricky trials a mundane Don't stay long in vain Cast away the blame Step down to the shame Breakfree on the frame Soar high don't restrain One awesome soft heart Let it go, don't depart Cry out loud if you must Release all the ill huffed Hold on thru velvety crushed Slowly keep on don't rush Hence, you will not get bust Through scattered dirty dust Soon, you will again trust One awesome soft heart Let it go, don't depart by Olive Eloisa 1:02 pm April 24, 2014 Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Contest Name: Any Poem # 26 8th place...

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Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/12/2014 4:02:00 PM

Hi Olive, Such an awsome sweet wonderful write. Loved it. Thanks Olive this was great to read. Thank you for sharing. Peace, Deborah

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 1:24:00 PM

Thanks so much Deborah..:) really appreciate your words:) GBU

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/6/2014 12:10:00 PM

How come I didn't read this 1 b4? WHOW! Such an elegant and catchy song written in perfect English! WOW! God bless you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:41:00 AM

:) thanks Ivo God bless as well :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2014 7:40:00 AM

Enjoyed the write. Congrats on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:40:00 AM

:) thanks Sir.. :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/1/2014 12:54:00 PM

Ssshhh!! ..You won again... congRaTulations!!! :O))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:38:00 AM

Thanks much.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/1/2014 12:47:00 PM

This heart is really awesome Olive but the head wins ! Congrats !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:39:00 AM

yes of course the head must always win.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2014 11:02:00 AM

OLIVE... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:38:00 AM

:) thank LInda.. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/27/2014 12:46:00 AM

One beautiful poem!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:37:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL COMMENT :) Thanks.. :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/24/2014 4:21:00 PM

Marvelous poem! - I had to ge that off my shoulders. "Iron chains of pain Tricky trials a mundane Don't stay long in vain Cast away the blame Step down to the shame Breakfree on the frame Soar high don't restrain": These lines are the awesome center piece in this verse. It's full of imagery and feelings and I adored this journey of words... -DWB

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/25/2014 12:20:00 PM

Thanks David for the kind comments.. :) Im glad you like it.. :) God bless always.. :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/24/2014 2:03:00 PM

I love how nuturing this poem is. " No spare part..." Oh how the heart needs to live, sometimes recklessly. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 3:59:00 PM

mmmmmn... recklessly...... hope not :) thanks for dropping by JAB :D

Paul Callus

Date: 4/24/2014 1:47:00 PM

You are one awesome girl Olive_eloi!!:) You don't have it easy, you ache, you yearn...but you are not weak. Your strength of character will get you through :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/4/2014 4:41:00 PM

Thanks much dearie Paul..:)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2014 12:57:00 PM

just peeping through the blinds....congratulations:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 4:45:00 PM

Thanks Dearie Paul.. I appreciate those comments.. :) God bless us all.. :) i still love life.. :)!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/24/2014 8:46:00 AM

Let it go...Time will help....hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thanks Tim:) Indeed time and prayer helped me a lot..:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2014 7:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work today..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Sara I appreciate your remarks:) God bless you always..:) I feel that your heart is as soft as this one:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/24/2014 5:22:00 AM

- Soft hearts in need of comfort and care - "One awesome soft heart Let it go, do not depart "- Sweet and beautifully written, Olive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise for the kind comments:) God bless you always:)