Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Lyric

One Awesome Heart

Fragile crystalline heart
Broken now are your parts
Thought you are that smart
You've been wrong, You're not
You are one enduring part
If shattered no spare part
Being careful a head start

One awesome soft heart
Let it go, don't depart

Iron chains of pain
Tricky trials a mundane
Don't stay long in vain
Cast away the blame
Step down to the shame
Breakfree on the frame
Soar high don't restrain

One awesome soft heart
Let it go, don't depart

Cry out loud if you must
Release all the ill huffed
Hold on thru velvety crushed
Slowly keep on don't rush
Hence, you will not get bust
Through scattered dirty dust
Soon, you will again trust

One awesome soft heart
Let it go, don't depart

by
Olive Eloisa
1:02 pm
April 24, 2014

Sponsor:   	Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name:	Any Poem # 26 
8th place...

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Deborah Shiells May 12, 2014 at 4:02 PM Hi Olive, Such an awsome sweet wonderful write. Loved it. Thanks Olive this was great to read. Thank you for sharing. Peace, Deborah Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 1:24 PM Thanks so much Deborah..:) really appreciate your words:) GBU

Ivor Kos May 6, 2014 at 12:10 PM How come I didn't read this 1 b4? WHOW! Such an elegant and catchy song written in perfect English! WOW! God bless you. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:41 AM :) thanks Ivo God bless as well :)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 2, 2014 at 7:40 AM Enjoyed the write. Congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:40 AM :) thanks Sir.. :)

Aiyah Torres May 1, 2014 at 12:54 PM Ssshhh!! ..You won again... congRaTulations!!! :O)) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:38 AM Thanks much.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 1, 2014 at 12:47 PM This heart is really awesome Olive but the head wins ! Congrats ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:39 AM yes of course the head must always win.. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 1, 2014 at 11:02 AM OLIVE... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA" Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:38 AM :) thank LInda.. :)

Arthur Vaso April 27, 2014 at 12:46 AM One beautiful poem! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:37 AM BEAUTIFUL COMMENT :) Thanks.. :)

David William Breidenthal April 24, 2014 at 4:21 PM Marvelous poem! - I had to ge that off my shoulders. "Iron chains of pain Tricky trials a mundane Don't stay long in vain Cast away the blame Step down to the shame Breakfree on the frame Soar high don't restrain": These lines are the awesome center piece in this verse. It's full of imagery and feelings and I adored this journey of words... -DWB Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 25, 2014 at 12:20 PM Thanks David for the kind comments.. :) Im glad you like it.. :) God bless always.. :)

Justin Bordner April 24, 2014 at 2:03 PM I love how nuturing this poem is. " No spare part..." Oh how the heart needs to live, sometimes recklessly. J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 3:59 PM mmmmmn... recklessly...... hope not :) thanks for dropping by JAB :D

Paul Callus April 24, 2014 at 1:47 PM You are one awesome girl Olive_eloi!!:) You don't have it easy, you ache, you yearn...but you are not weak. Your strength of character will get you through :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 4, 2014 at 4:41 PM Thanks much dearie Paul..:) Paul Callus May 1, 2014 at 12:57 PM just peeping through the blinds....congratulations:) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 4:45 PM Thanks Dearie Paul.. I appreciate those comments.. :) God bless us all.. :) i still love life.. :)!

Tim Smith April 24, 2014 at 8:46 AM Let it go...Time will help....hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 11:36 AM Thanks Tim:) Indeed time and prayer helped me a lot..:)

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2014 at 7:45 AM Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work today..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 11:02 AM Thank you Sara I appreciate your remarks:) God bless you always..:) I feel that your heart is as soft as this one:)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2014 at 5:22 AM - Soft hearts in need of comfort and care - "One awesome soft heart Let it go, do not depart "- Sweet and beautifully written, Olive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 10:52 AM Thanks Anne Lise for the kind comments:) God bless you always:)