Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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Inspired by the "One Autumn Night" contest and photos of my loving poet sis and bff Linda

One Autumn Night

On a desolate splendor of this autumn night
We listen to the serene call of the gleaming moonlight
Deciduous trees stand tall to acclaim its magnificence
Conducting the melodious whispers of the cold and gentle wind
As each golden neon foliage shimmers and pirouettes on view
You hold me tight as I hold you, too
For this autumn night will rise the citadel of love…just me and you







Sept. 8,2014 11.15pm






First Place
Contest: One Autumn Night (in just 7 lines)
Judged: 12/27/2014
Sponsor: All time most fave/greatest poet, Linda

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Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2015 at 1:49 AM Leonora, thanks for your greetings. It is almost one now. I have GOT to get to bed. and I hardly even commented to many poets yet!!!

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2014 at 11:42 PM This is really nice and romantic. Congrats again, Leonora. Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:21 AM Thank you so much again my dearest friend Andrea. More blessings to you! I'll be back ok.

Maurice Yvonne December 28, 2014 at 1:48 PM Such a wonderfully written poem, leonora, Congratulations on your fine win. Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:20 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Maurice. More blessings to you. Big hugs!

Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 12:54 PM Dropping back with my congrats Leonora:-) Hugs Jan xx Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:18 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Jan. Big congrats on your wins too. I'll visit you soon and the rests of us here. Big hugs!

John Lawless December 27, 2014 at 12:16 PM ..."The citadel of love".....That line shot me right back to the start to reread this wonderful poem again. Congratulations on a well deserved placement. Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:15 AM Thank you so much my dear friend John. Those are very encouraging and inspiring words for me. More blessings back at you. Belated Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! Big hugs!

Bl Devnath December 27, 2014 at 10:04 AM Congrats on your superb win, my lovely friend. It's an amazing poem on Autumn Night. Loved always,bl Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:16 AM BTW, belated merry Christmas to you and your loved ones my dear friend. Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:12 AM Thank you so much and hearty congrats as well for your wins my dear friend. I'll visit you soon. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A December 27, 2014 at 9:53 AM Leo, my lovely poetry soup sister... I love how romantic this poem is... Congratulations on your top win, in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE YOU.ALWAYS YOUR BFF LINDA Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 1:03 AM Words are inadequate for me to say thank you for my top win dearest poet sis of mine, and most especially for seeing you around here. Your presence means a lot to me and to us here; you're always a blessing to us at soup and a very precious gift to us this Christmas. TYTYTYSSSM. Many, many hugs back at you. Thanks a lot also for your untiring support. I/WE LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 3:28 PM How lovely this poem is Leonora. Ahhh the romance of autumn nights. Blessings, Connie Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 5:08 AM :)) Yes it is my dear friend Connie. Belated thank you so much. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Nette Onclaud September 9, 2014 at 6:36 AM delicately expressed, dear lory... how are you?.. my friend is in bkk now, I was supposed to go but had work to do.. thanks for choosing my poem for your contest.. I wanted to do a blog but my PM expired and can't renew as card- hacking here is tricky.. like you, I was sponsored since my entry here on soup... take care and huggs! Len Gasun September 11, 2014 at 6:25 AM Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit my very dear friend Nette. Well, despite the perennial snag of health, with God's mercy, still kickin ;). Hope you're doin well always too. Don't exhaust yourself to much like me, k:)). Oh, your PM, God said, there will be light. I'm sure there will be light again. :) Tcare always too. Big Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2014 at 6:09 PM I love this one of yours, Leonora. Very beautiful imagery! Len Gasun September 11, 2014 at 6:15 AM Thank you so much again my very dear friend Andrea. Big Hugs!

Tim Smith September 8, 2014 at 3:23 PM Oh wow Leonora....I just love this...straight to my favs.....hugs Tim Len Gasun September 11, 2014 at 6:15 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Tim. I'm humbled to say it's my honor. I was just inspired to write this poem by the fantastic photos posted by my loving poet sis and BFF, Linda. We don't have autumn here. Hope I can experience this someday if i have opportunities to visit places having this season. TYSM! Big hugs!

Jan Allison September 8, 2014 at 3:14 PM Simply stunning Leonora! I love the imagery - good luck for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx Len Gasun September 11, 2014 at 6:11 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Jan. Big Hugs!

Maurice Yvonne September 8, 2014 at 12:20 PM i have added this to my favs. this write leaves me speechless in its excellence. can i borrow it for a while, there's this contest i want to enter it in.BRILLIANT!!!! Len Gasun September 11, 2014 at 6:09 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Maurice. It's my great honor and pleasure. I humbly say, sure why not; but please you can improve it. I'm not sure if my poem is ok 'cuz i never had experience of autumn. We don't have here. I was just inspired by the photos posted by my dearest poet sis-BFF, Linda. TYTYSM again. Big Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2014 at 12:11 PM - Dear Leonora, a beautiful poem - The meaning of life living in every expression of life - It is present in the infinity of forms, nature, colors, love and phenomena that exist in all of creation on earth - Good luck in the contest - All the best to you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun September 11, 2014 at 6:05 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise. More blessings to you! Big hugs!