Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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One Autumn Day

Amidst the scorching heat of the sun
Everyone likes to feel its glowing colors all around
Children tossed up and down those kaleidoscopic leaves
As they giggle, roll on the ground and jig
Leaves are like colorful petals and butterflies
Huddling all in their salubrious place of plight
One Autumn Day is truly a nature’s rhapsodic show in our sight


12 Sept.,2014 12.05am






Second Place
Contest: One Autumn Day (in just 7 lines)
Judged: 12/28/2014
Sponsor: My greatest and all time most fave, Poet PD

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Maurice Yvonne December 29, 2014 at 7:36 PM Congratulations Leonora on your fine win.

John Lawless December 29, 2014 at 5:16 PM and as all children know....freshly raked piles of leaves are....FOR JUMPING IN.... Well done, congrats.

Paul Callus December 29, 2014 at 5:35 AM Delightfully penned, Leonora! ... indeed a rhapsodic show! (a most fitting photo, too.] Congrats on a lovely podium finish. hugs // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 29, 2014 at 2:08 AM I can visualize nature’s rhapsodic show Leonora. Congrats.Wish you and your family a very prosperous new year 2015. Love--rajat

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2014 at 11:04 PM Leonora, this is one of your best poems ever. Love the cool words you used and the sweet picture you showed. A FAVE Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 12:49 AM Oh, thank you so much my very dear friend! It's an honor for me if you fave this short poem of mine. TYTYSSM. I'll visit you soon ok. I'm almost recovered now from flu but still, annoying cough disturbs me. How I wish to stay longer around here but my slow internet is again in tandem. So I'll try to be back to soon. Hope you and your family had a wonderful Christmas season. Wishing you and your loved ones all the best! Many hugs!

Kayod5 Kayode December 28, 2014 at 10:45 AM This is appealing,congrats on the win Leonora...huggs Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 12:38 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Kayod. Big hugs!

Jan Allison December 28, 2014 at 10:26 AM Many congrats on such a delightful poem:-) hugs Jan xx Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 12:37 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Jan. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 10:11 AM Hello, my lovely sweet sis, loving the huddle, and the fact that this was your poem on my winning list. Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever your bFF ~LINDA~ Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 12:36 AM Thank you so much for my win, for appreciating my poem and especially for your presence my forever loving poet sis and best friend Linda. Many hugs back at you. God bless you and your loved ones always. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas season with your family/loved ones! Wishing you the best always especially this New Year 2015 to come!

Daver Austin October 23, 2014 at 9:43 AM The leaves as rhapsodic. I like it. I enjoy your way with color. Love, daver Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 12:32 AM Belated thank you so much my dear friend Daver. Big hugs!

Mark J. Halliday October 10, 2014 at 11:58 AM Very nice piece. I need to look up 'salubrious' though to get the full sense. Nice imagery. Len Gasun December 29, 2014 at 12:31 AM Belated thank you so much my dear friend Mark. I'll visit you soon. Big hugs!

Arthur Vaso October 2, 2014 at 11:05 PM Beautiful! http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/baebelto/scenery/s16.jpg Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 5:01 AM thanks for sharing those albums on this link my dear friend! God creations are truly wonderful! tytyty Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 4:25 AM Belated thank you so much my very dear friend arthur. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri September 29, 2014 at 10:28 AM A beautiful autumn poem and i adored the grandiloquent words that i learnt frm it wow. U r a super poetess! So nice to read u again. Take care. Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 4:24 AM Belated thank you so much my very dear fried S. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 10:58 PM just stopping by to say hi. And I still love this poem. Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 4:23 AM Belated thank you so much my very dear friend Andrea. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read once more my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 3:30 PM I agree Leonora. I adore everything about autumn, especially the changing colors. Your poem captures this brilliantly! Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 4:21 AM Belated thank you so much my very dear friend, Connie. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2014 at 12:04 PM Delightful one, Leo Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:19 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. Big hug!

Tim Smith September 13, 2014 at 9:01 AM So light and fun Leonora....very refreshing...hugs Tim Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:18 AM Thank you so much again for your kind visit and your very inspiring comments my dear friend Tim. Big hugs!

Ravi Sathasivam September 13, 2014 at 1:48 AM Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:17 AM Thank you so much for your very encouraging and inspiring comments my dear friend Ravi. Big hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 13, 2014 at 1:24 AM Oh that's lovely n cute Leonora! Love ur brilliant take! Best wishes! Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:16 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend Dr. Upma. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2014 at 9:48 PM this is an autumn delight, Leonora!! Love how you put some giggling kids into the poem. PD will love it. great imagery, sweetie. Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:14 AM I hope she will my dear friend Andrea. Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by and your very encouraging comments. Big hugs to you!

Bl Devnath September 12, 2014 at 2:42 PM Refreshing poem clearing the haze of going life. Beautiful all the ways, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:12 AM Thank you so much my dear friend BL. Big hugs!

Maurice Yvonne September 12, 2014 at 1:53 PM This is excellent. It should do well in the contest. Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:12 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Maurice. I hope my loving poet sis will appreciate it. Many thanks for stopping by and your lovely comments. I appreciate it so much. Big hugs!

Barbara Gorelick September 12, 2014 at 1:13 PM One of my memories of my boys when they were young..jumping in piles of leaves. I sure enjoyed your poem. BG Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:10 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Barbara. Big hugs!