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One Autumn Day

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Amidst the scorching heat of the sun Everyone likes to feel its glowing colors all around Children tossed up and down those kaleidoscopic leaves As they giggle, roll on the ground and jig Leaves are like colorful petals and butterflies Huddling all in their salubrious place of plight One Autumn Day is truly a nature’s rhapsodic show in our sight 12 Sept.,2014 12.05am Second Place Contest: One Autumn Day (in just 7 lines) Judged: 12/28/2014 Sponsor: My greatest and all time most fave, Poet PD

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/29/2014 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations Leonora on your fine win.

John Lawless

Date: 12/29/2014 5:16:00 PM

and as all children know....freshly raked piles of leaves are....FOR JUMPING IN.... Well done, congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2014 5:35:00 AM

Delightfully penned, Leonora! ... indeed a rhapsodic show! (a most fitting photo, too.] Congrats on a lovely podium finish. hugs // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/29/2014 2:08:00 AM

I can visualize nature’s rhapsodic show Leonora. Congrats.Wish you and your family a very prosperous new year 2015. Love--rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2014 11:04:00 PM

Leonora, this is one of your best poems ever. Love the cool words you used and the sweet picture you showed. A FAVE

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 12:49:00 AM

Oh, thank you so much my very dear friend! It's an honor for me if you fave this short poem of mine. TYTYSSM. I'll visit you soon ok. I'm almost recovered now from flu but still, annoying cough disturbs me. How I wish to stay longer around here but my slow internet is again in tandem. So I'll try to be back to soon. Hope you and your family had a wonderful Christmas season. Wishing you and your loved ones all the best! Many hugs!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/28/2014 10:45:00 AM

This is appealing,congrats on the win Leonora...huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 12:38:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Kayod. Big hugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2014 10:26:00 AM

Many congrats on such a delightful poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Jan. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 10:11:00 AM

Hello, my lovely sweet sis, loving the huddle, and the fact that this was your poem on my winning list. Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever your bFF ~LINDA~

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 12:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for my win, for appreciating my poem and especially for your presence my forever loving poet sis and best friend Linda. Many hugs back at you. God bless you and your loved ones always. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas season with your family/loved ones! Wishing you the best always especially this New Year 2015 to come!

Daver Austin

Date: 10/23/2014 9:43:00 AM

The leaves as rhapsodic. I like it. I enjoy your way with color. Love, daver

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 12:32:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend Daver. Big hugs!

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 10/10/2014 11:58:00 AM

Very nice piece. I need to look up 'salubrious' though to get the full sense. Nice imagery.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 12:31:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend Mark. I'll visit you soon. Big hugs!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/2/2014 11:05:00 PM

Beautiful! http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn283/baebelto/scenery/s16.jpg

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2014 5:01:00 AM

thanks for sharing those albums on this link my dear friend! God creations are truly wonderful! tytyty

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2014 4:25:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my very dear friend arthur. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/29/2014 10:28:00 AM

A beautiful autumn poem and i adored the grandiloquent words that i learnt frm it wow. U r a super poetess! So nice to read u again. Take care.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2014 4:24:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my very dear fried S. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2014 10:58:00 PM

just stopping by to say hi. And I still love this poem.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2014 4:23:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my very dear friend Andrea. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read once more my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2014 3:30:00 PM

I agree Leonora. I adore everything about autumn, especially the changing colors. Your poem captures this brilliantly!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2014 4:21:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my very dear friend, Connie. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2014 12:04:00 PM

Delightful one, Leo

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:19:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. Big hug!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/13/2014 9:01:00 AM

So light and fun Leonora....very refreshing...hugs Tim

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:18:00 AM

Thank you so much again for your kind visit and your very inspiring comments my dear friend Tim. Big hugs!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/13/2014 1:48:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very encouraging and inspiring comments my dear friend Ravi. Big hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/13/2014 1:24:00 AM

Oh that's lovely n cute Leonora! Love ur brilliant take! Best wishes!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:16:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Dr. Upma. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2014 9:48:00 PM

this is an autumn delight, Leonora!! Love how you put some giggling kids into the poem. PD will love it. great imagery, sweetie.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:14:00 AM

I hope she will my dear friend Andrea. Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by and your very encouraging comments. Big hugs to you!

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/12/2014 2:42:00 PM

Refreshing poem clearing the haze of going life. Beautiful all the ways, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:12:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend BL. Big hugs!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/12/2014 1:53:00 PM

This is excellent. It should do well in the contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:12:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Maurice. I hope my loving poet sis will appreciate it. Many thanks for stopping by and your lovely comments. I appreciate it so much. Big hugs!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/12/2014 1:13:00 PM

One of my memories of my boys when they were young..jumping in piles of leaves. I sure enjoyed your poem. BG

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Barbara. Big hugs!