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One Autumn Day

One autumn day I saw the leaves fall down I watched the deer as they danced around I saw the flowers turn oh so brown As Jack Frost let us know he is in town The beekeeper is putting his bees to bed As the honey flow is almost dead The end of autumn is what some dread

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/29/2014 7:48:00 PM

A very unique write, congratulations on your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2014 11:09:00 PM

a good representation of many of the things that happen as winter approaches!! Congrats.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/28/2014 10:57:00 AM

A well crafted Poem,congrats on the win Charles...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2014 10:33:00 AM

I love Autumn but winter too has its joys - lovely write:-) many congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 10:13:00 AM

Charles,Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Cona Adams

Date: 10/23/2014 1:47:00 PM

Nice poem, Charles. I love the changing of the seasons. You have given us good imagery. Our persimmons are almost ripe, time to make persimmon bread!

Charles Reese
Date: 10/23/2014 9:09:00 PM

Never had persimmon bread thanks for your review of this little poem.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/11/2014 12:27:00 AM

I dread the end of Autumn. I enjoyed your poem. God bless you and love and prayers, Gina

Charles Reese
Date: 9/11/2014 7:34:00 AM

Thanks,the key to enjoying any season in my humble opinion is to goals in it and people who will help you achieve them.