One Autumn Day

One autumn day I saw the leaves fall down
I watched the deer as they danced around
I saw the flowers turn oh so brown
As Jack Frost let us know he is in town
The beekeeper is putting his bees to bed
As the honey flow is almost dead
The end of autumn is what some dread
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:48 PM
A very unique write, congratulations on your well deserved win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:09 PM
a good representation of many of the things that happen as winter approaches!! Congrats.
Kayode Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:57 AM
A well crafted Poem,congrats on the win Charles...huggs
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:33 AM
I love Autumn but winter too has its joys - lovely write:-) many congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Charles,Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Adams Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Nice poem, Charles. I love the changing of the seasons. You have given us good imagery. Our persimmons are almost ripe, time to make persimmon bread!
Reese Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Never had persimmon bread thanks for your review of this little poem.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 12:27 AM
I dread the end of Autumn. I enjoyed your poem. God bless you and love and prayers, Gina
Reese Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Thanks,the key to enjoying any season in my humble opinion is to goals in it and people who will help you achieve them.
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