Gregory Richard Barden Poet Iambic Pentameter

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One and Only Hue

I stood atop a mountain, long ago,


               My breath gone, from the blushing sunset skies,


So sad, I'd ne'er again behold that glow ...
      

               Yet, I've found it once again ... deep in your eyes.




~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Romantic Charm In Four Lines" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Sponsor.

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 3:06 PM I love it, Gregory. Congrats on your win. Gregory Richard Barden February 22, 2018 at 12:27 AM Very kind of you, Line - thank you, my friend! :-) <3

Pandita Sietesantos February 18, 2018 at 10:01 AM Congrats, my dear friend on your wonderful, well-deserved win! This piece is a gem, captivatingly beautiful - a masterpiece, an awesome write! Hugs. Pandita Gregory Richard Barden February 22, 2018 at 12:27 AM That's very sweet of you, Pandita ... thank you very much, my friend! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:26 PM wow, amazing one, Gregory. Right next to mine. It's so good to see this one on the winner list! Congrats. Gregory Richard Barden February 16, 2018 at 2:24 AM Thank you so much, Andrea ... I've got a ways to go to get caught up as far as this contest, but I'm getting there and will read the others soon! I am honored to be ANYwhere near your name on ANY list, Buddy! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 12:02 PM - Jepp, romantic congratulations Gregory - // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden February 16, 2018 at 2:23 AM Very sweet of you, Anne-Lise - I'm very glad you liked this one, friend! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 14, 2018 at 11:39 AM Works for me ;) love it! Congrats on your win dear poet <3 xomo! Gregory Richard Barden February 16, 2018 at 2:22 AM Thank you, thank you, Dear Friend - much appreciated! :-) <3

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 8:59 AM Beautiful comparison Greg... Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Gregory Richard Barden February 16, 2018 at 2:22 AM Thank you so much, S1, I am honored, my friend ... so pleased you enjoyed this! :-)

Kim Rodrigues February 13, 2018 at 10:53 PM So romantic! To find the beauty in your lover’s eyes! Gregory Richard Barden February 14, 2018 at 1:36 AM The windows to the soul, indeed, Kim ... thank you, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier February 13, 2018 at 9:33 PM Great 4-liner, Gregory. Beautiful. Gregory Richard Barden February 14, 2018 at 1:36 AM Very kind of you, Line - thank you so! :-) <3