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One and Only Hue

I stood atop a mountain, long ago,


               My breath gone, from the blushing sunset skies,


So sad, I'd ne'er again behold that glow ...
      

               Yet, I've found it once again ... deep in your eyes.




~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Romantic Charm In Four Lines" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Sponsor.

Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2018

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Line Gauthier Date: 2/18/2018 3:06:00 PM I love it, Gregory. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/22/2018 12:27:00 AM Very kind of you, Line - thank you, my friend! :-) <3

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 2/18/2018 10:01:00 AM Congrats, my dear friend on your wonderful, well-deserved win! This piece is a gem, captivatingly beautiful - a masterpiece, an awesome write! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/22/2018 12:27:00 AM That's very sweet of you, Pandita ... thank you very much, my friend! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2018 6:26:00 PM wow, amazing one, Gregory. Right next to mine. It's so good to see this one on the winner list! Congrats. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/16/2018 2:24:00 AM Thank you so much, Andrea ... I've got a ways to go to get caught up as far as this contest, but I'm getting there and will read the others soon! I am honored to be ANYwhere near your name on ANY list, Buddy! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2018 12:02:00 PM - Jepp, romantic congratulations Gregory - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/16/2018 2:23:00 AM Very sweet of you, Anne-Lise - I'm very glad you liked this one, friend! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 2/14/2018 11:39:00 AM Works for me ;) love it! Congrats on your win dear poet <3 xomo! Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/16/2018 2:22:00 AM Thank you, thank you, Dear Friend - much appreciated! :-) <3

Silent One Date: 2/14/2018 8:59:00 AM Beautiful comparison Greg... Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/16/2018 2:22:00 AM Thank you so much, S1, I am honored, my friend ... so pleased you enjoyed this! :-)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/13/2018 10:53:00 PM So romantic! To find the beauty in your lover’s eyes! Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/14/2018 1:36:00 AM The windows to the soul, indeed, Kim ... thank you, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier Date: 2/13/2018 9:33:00 PM Great 4-liner, Gregory. Beautiful. Login to Reply Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/14/2018 1:36:00 AM Very kind of you, Line - thank you so! :-) <3