One a Day

By Angeline Vine 

In the midst of someone's middle age
it was discovered that one a day
could help 

Except it really depended on what
one accepted as 'middle age'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duncan Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Yes, it does depend on what you call middle age. I'm 63 :)
Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 8:15 PM
I had to smile, as this is a positive painting depicting how personal desires and attitudes can bring either blessed paradise or barren deserts.. Age is all relative--relative as to when one can see more looking forward or looking backwards.
Joshua Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:53 AM
One a day....Thank you!
One Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 5:04 PM
Nice write..
Vine Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Thank you
Makama Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 12:05 PM
This is fantastic, welcome to poetrysoup.
Vine Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 2:02 PM
THanks and Thank you for the welcome!
Fields Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup - :-) - the poem is smart and to the point
Vine Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 7:42 PM
THank you for the welcome and comment!
White Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 2:17 AM
That makes me smile. I like your poem! Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Vine Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Thanks for the welcome! THanks
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