One

Thy try if not I rise 
Thou if I fall Death works on
respect their or is it there 
my truth is honest , but;
How honest of it is my price
Ya! the grasshopper speaks
neither less a blind speaks
God are to give a hand
Never a leg but as I see
Rain identify as I mention a angel cries 
Now we give Faith to come to a Y
Arouse caterpillar  its time . I epiphany
Why never shall it to become the illustration of failure;
For Failure I must explain is only a try
I will be on your side for truth is blood as simple ; for the is but
Now at my mirror,'' keep on the game of life ''
for when you read this I should have surely died 
P.S. I'll never stop asking Y
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 21, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Louis Velazquez, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 19, 2016 at 2:07 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Louis. :)
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May 18, 2016 at 10:35 PM
PS... Louis,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 18, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Hi Louis,"Is that the letter y? Just wondering no worries, it's used commonly by a range of new poets. I kind of like it. One is the perfect SOlo number to ever be... :) Linda
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