One

I will flow 
where the energy 
of love impels me
to flow—

just as wild rivers 
pursue the pull of the 
distant waves—to
each kiss from the salt 
of the ocean—

to become whole—
One.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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McBride  Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Great write and inspiration, love it
Breidenthal Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 9:29 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words —Laura
Scott Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 7:29 PM
Very shakspear beautiful write my friend To feel whole complete would be nice Davidscott xx
Breidenthal Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 9:28 PM
Means a lot to me David! Thanks so much. <3 —Laura
Maverick Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Good emphatically penned write here Laura.'
Breidenthal Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Appreciate your thoughts on this one, Joe. ~Laura
Bordner Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Salted kisses on the crest of a love deluge is a bliss crash...J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 1:16 AM
<3 bliss crash indeed, Justin. Always well said. ~Laura
Scott Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Yes to feel whoe complete would be nice again beautiful peace well penned xx
Breidenthal Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Thanks david...I wish you a life full of love and completeness. <3 ~Laura
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