Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Etheree

Once You Sign

Once
You see
You should know
What to expect
Should you not adhere
To the rules written here
Read and signed by yourself
No rights do you have to expect
There will be any changing of the rules
By anyone for anyone-sign and date please

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Cheryl Glans June 1, 2012 at 12:36 PM Awesome!!! don't change a thing. It's great as it is

Mike T April 23, 2012 at 4:11 PM I like the Orwellian space you carve out here. Methinks you left out a "not" or a "no" in the penultimate line, though. Maybe use a hyphen instead of an elipsis? Interesting stuff!

Nick Bagnall February 29, 2012 at 5:10 AM Nicely done. good to see something which is not about love, religion of flowers :) not so mush deep meanig, more a commentary on the state of society, interesting

Robert Walker February 25, 2012 at 6:33 AM really makes me read in between the lines ----------------deep -i like your writing alot

Don Johnson February 24, 2012 at 5:09 PM self written contracts of the blest, purgatory waits if its a deleted pest... good one here my Sweet...

Harry Horsman February 24, 2012 at 7:37 AM loving these philosophical poems i'm reading today Carol, another awesome write from your pen. harry

Diana Rosser February 24, 2012 at 3:00 AM I enjoyed reading 'Once you sign'. It made me think, what did you have to sign recently that prompted you to write it.

Russell Sivey February 23, 2012 at 12:23 PM This is so very real and true! I hate it when I feel pressured into signing something I'm not sure about! Great Work!!