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Once You Sign

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Once You Sign

You see
You should know
What to expect
Should you not adhere
To the rules written here
Read and signed by yourself
No rights do you have to expect
There will be any changing of the rules
By anyone for anyone-sign and date please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 6/1/2012 12:36:00 PM
Awesome!!! don't change a thing. It's great as it is
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Date: 4/23/2012 4:11:00 PM
I like the Orwellian space you carve out here. Methinks you left out a "not" or a "no" in the penultimate line, though. Maybe use a hyphen instead of an elipsis? Interesting stuff!
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:10:00 AM
Nicely done. good to see something which is not about love, religion of flowers :) not so mush deep meanig, more a commentary on the state of society, interesting
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:33:00 AM
really makes me read in between the lines ----------------deep -i like your writing alot
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Date: 2/24/2012 5:09:00 PM
self written contracts of the blest, purgatory waits if its a deleted pest... good one here my Sweet...
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Date: 2/24/2012 7:37:00 AM
loving these philosophical poems i'm reading today Carol, another awesome write from your pen. harry
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading 'Once you sign'. It made me think, what did you have to sign recently that prompted you to write it.
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:23:00 PM
This is so very real and true! I hate it when I feel pressured into signing something I'm not sure about! Great Work!!
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