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Once Wild

The horse was born Outside in the wild Where hooves have worn The intentions have riled The future running over the land They consider what lies ahead And remember the impacts of man Greater fear of what they dread Building of cities far and wide Have left no room to run free Forcing the mustang to abide Their freedom will cease to be March 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/30/2022 5:28:00 PM
Development have side effect too, No room for other very touching lines. Have a good day
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Date: 1/21/2022 2:42:00 PM
I abhor how they round them up and sell them to the glue factory. It is so sad. A supportive tribute to a beautiful animal Amya. Blessings
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Date: 11/21/2019 2:35:00 AM
beautiful poem penned// I enjoyed
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Date: 11/19/2019 6:04:00 PM
Nicely done. You almost make wanna go and ride.
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Date: 3/15/2018 9:25:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem,Amya , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:47:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Amya - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Amya, a lovely piece. Viv x
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Date: 3/14/2018 4:03:00 PM
Back with congrats for this totally out-of -the-box entry. Most delightful. Congrats again, Amya.
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:04:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Amya. Beautiful imagery of wild mustangs. Well done and congrats.
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Amya Ranck
Date: 3/12/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 3/3/2018 11:04:00 PM
Oh Amya, I love mustangs and I love your beautiful and thought provoking poem about these magnificent horses and their place in the our world. They're a symbol of freedom and it's so sad to see them losing theirs.. An expressive and lovely write!
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Amya Ranck
Date: 3/4/2018 5:54:00 AM
Thank you so much. They really are magnificent creatures.

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