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Once Upon Forever

Once upon forever I fell so hard in love It was so unexpected Fate gave a forceful shove I fell right into you Into your deep blue eyes Deeper still into your mind Where hidden mystery lies Consuming now, every page Written in your life's book I can never put it down I need just one more look My heart has been entranced By your sweet soul's true song A dark and haunting melody That drags me fearfully along I'm lost now, until forever Never more shall I return My soul has now been branded And in your love's fire I burn

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Date: 11/28/2018 10:24:00 AM
Gregory, this stanza here was good enough to knock my shoes off without the rest of it, "Consuming now, every page Written in your life's book I can never put it down now I need just one more look". But the rest was also wonderful, of course.
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