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Once Upon Bliss

A time before hurricanes, when tempests were ardently intoxicating and fuchsia roses blushed beneath fervently lit moons, unfurling lovers' persuasions once upon bliss 'fore hurricanes

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Date: 10/21/2016 9:06:00 AM
This one blew me away (Pun intended) I saw this earlier and couldn't wait to log back on a read it and now I wish I hadn't waited so long. Absolutely beautiful Paloma. This one show the fierceness of what true love really is. Hmmm, the captcha on this was 4UU...hmmm. :)
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Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 10:13:00 AM
MeMe? Your words brought a smile to my poetic heart, thank you so much Chris. :)
Date: 10/21/2016 8:07:00 AM
The tender beauty of a "fuchsia rose" may overcome the brute strength of a hurricane! Vivid images, powerful message dear, Paloma!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 8:28:00 AM
Such a poetically lovely comment, thanks so much Demetrios!
Date: 10/21/2016 7:00:00 AM
Hi Paloma: A simple poem of imagery and intoxicating word . Great Write!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 7:46:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind words, many thanks Ralph!

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