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Once Upon a Wish or Two 


haiku #1                    A Man's Wish

                          I am only man
                     wishing to connect with God
                                       but I am just man

haiku #2                     God's Wish

                          Yes, you are a man
                      wishing to connect with ME
                                         DO NOT HESITATE

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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/23/2024 12:59:00 PM
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LOVE! XO
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/22/2024 8:37:00 PM
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Option A: man is but a beast // howling for heavenly help // clothed as holy priest... Thanks for the 'food for thought,' Benjamin. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 1:15:00 PM
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Very well said. I would think God would love this one! Blessings, Benjamin!
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/20/2024 1:38:00 PM
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Thank you.

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