Once Upon a Wish or Two


haiku #1                    A Man's Wish

                          I am only man
                     wishing to connect with God
                                       but I am just man

haiku #2                     God's Wish

                          Yes, you are a man
                      wishing to connect with ME
                                         DO NOT HESITATE
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Woods Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:59 PM
LOVE! XO
Wolf Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 8:37 PM
Option A: man is but a beast // howling for heavenly help // clothed as holy priest... Thanks for the 'food for thought,' Benjamin. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Very well said. I would think God would love this one! Blessings, Benjamin!
Bartley Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Thank you.
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