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Once Upon a Winter's Night

Once upon a cold winter's night There reigned a snow-capped mountain The rock hearth glowed with embers bright And love flowed like a seeping fountain In memories it flows again unslain Snowy winters come and go and go Snow 'pon the mountain thins Fires in the rocky hearth sometimes glows Only on cold winter nights~ love spins And pain's memory chamber ends Snowy mountains don't remain Avalanches, earthquakes take their due For that mountain love uncontained Let that hearth fire now renew Amazing love flourish and accrue Inspired by Francine Roberts Contest: A Winter's Night In English Quintain Written: November 23, 2013

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Date: 12/4/2013 11:38:00 PM
A beautiful piece, flowed with such grace. Well done. XOXOX
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Date: 11/25/2013 10:14:00 PM
Mixing winter and love nicely Sarah...great job...
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Date: 11/25/2013 5:15:00 PM
A very heartwarming poem, Sara! I love the imagery that you always put into your poetry. It makes reading them even more enjoyable! Really great work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again! :)
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:46:00 AM
your musix speaks to me, sara... the rest of what you feel about winter's spell is a gift for my ears and soul ...:) huggs
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Date: 11/24/2013 8:13:00 PM
- A wonderful winter poem, Sara ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2013 5:28:00 PM
a great piece the words flow so well very nice
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Date: 11/24/2013 1:00:00 PM
sreaming piece flowing like a river, sara... and with such greaceful ease; lovely!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/24/2013 9:34:00 AM
wonderful write Sara...I enjoyed the read
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Date: 11/24/2013 6:52:00 AM
Excellent. A brilliant piece of writing. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 11/24/2013 2:40:00 AM
sara, I am impressed how you wrote of something very different from the expected on this topic. I am still pondering how to do this one. Nice!
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:40:00 PM
Hi Sara, This is a beautiful, winter poem! I love the english quintain and you have written in the form wonderfully!! Love the last stanza...Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:34:00 PM
Liked the last two lines especially - a hearth is a symbol of happiness when the air turns frigid. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/23/2013 7:34:00 PM
I loved how you finished this write my friend! You have delighted my senses by your awesome words here this evening! What a grandiose piece Sara, Great Work with your finished write!!
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Date: 11/23/2013 7:13:00 AM
a lovely and painful spin, Sara amazing how much the image stands out. .hugs...Linda
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Date: 11/23/2013 6:47:00 AM
This is an awesome beginning to a wondrous write my friend! I look forward to the finished version of this incredible poem Sara! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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