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Once upon a Winter Go-Go

        Plastic go-go
          Yellow snow, O!

        Iceman cometh
          Hummingbird hummeth

        Frostbite itch
          Rapid eye twitch

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          Winter, Savor



    ~ Really, this is a 'footle-like' couplet --
         aka 'a fertile couplet.' lol. ~ gw

appreciationbirdsnowsweetwintercouplet

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Hilda Greenhough

May 12, 2025 at 7:20 AM

Perfect rhyme and rhythm. I envision a western barn dance and a fiddle.

CayCay Godwin

May 12, 2025 at 6:59 AM

sent you a Soup Mail

CayCay Godwin

May 12, 2025 at 1:22 AM

Thank you, Gershon, thank you, thank you for making me laugh aloud. I adore this (still laughing while I type.) I completely lost it at, "Hummingbird hummeth" but giggles smoothed out until 'a fertile couplet'. I don't know what Winter Go-Go means, is that just my brain? I always wonder that when I don't understand something in a poem that other commenters obviously do. Oh, well, I gotta be me. There are times when I adore you ... CayCay (yes, this is such a time.)

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