Once Upon a Time Beautiful

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looking at the cold december full moon i wrote this 

Flowering night light 
voice of midnight chimes 

Opening a gateway 
into shadows dancing blindly
Candlelight of thoughts 
liquid silver shines a chalice 

Spilling blood from darkness creeps 
Your beam touching petals
 
Softly white encircles time held still 
the fullness of your glorious face
Enriching cold awakening 
breaths turning senses 
clear within a breathless whisper cuts 

A thousand dreams answered

When one vision complete 
touching the stars wink 
capturing before these eyes

Dazzling thirst howls
dressed in ivory satin cream attire

Kissing goodnight 
into the soul echoes bounce gently 
within a mountain's crumbling voice 
winds blowing Gale 
hang within the balance

As clouds swallow the lunar vision 
under a grey veil held captive 

You hide as rainfalls knock
on heaven's door sweet flower 
coldly winter graces the heart 
as it smiles freely 

Crashing tides clearly turn around 
kissing over and back salted sands 
upon the soles of your feets journey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/21/2017 8:38:00 AM
Enchanting solo piece in free verse style.
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:42:00 PM
Hi, Liam. Top class write...Lots and lots of stunning lines - Really enjoyed the read! All the very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john
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Date: 1/5/2017 10:18:00 AM
You present such deep verses that must come from a kind and romantic heart my friend! I have never read a poem by you that was not top class and inspiring!A7 Added to my fav list my friend.. Thanks..
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Date: 12/16/2016 7:20:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! A wondrous, stark, and compelling write indeed. Most Excellent as always my dear friend. The imagery and power of your verses dazzle and excite the reader's imagination here for sure!! Cheers, Best, and Merry Christmas!! Gary
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Date: 12/15/2016 6:19:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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