Once Upon a Time Beautiful

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looking at the cold december full moon i wrote this

Flowering night light voice of midnight chimes Opening a gateway into shadows dancing blindly Candlelight of thoughts liquid silver shines a chalice Spilling blood from darkness creeps Your beam touching petals Softly white encircles time held still the fullness of your glorious face Enriching cold awakening breaths turning senses clear within a breathless whisper cuts A thousand dreams answered When one vision complete touching the stars wink capturing before these eyes Dazzling thirst howls dressed in ivory satin cream attire Kissing goodnight into the soul echoes bounce gently within a mountain's crumbling voice winds blowing Gale hang within the balance As clouds swallow the lunar vision under a grey veil held captive You hide as rainfalls knock on heaven's door sweet flower coldly winter graces the heart as it smiles freely Crashing tides clearly turn around kissing over and back salted sands upon the soles of your feets journey

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 1/21/2017 8:38:00 AM

Enchanting solo piece in free verse style.

John Fleming

Date: 1/5/2017 1:42:00 PM

Hi, Liam. Top class write...Lots and lots of stunning lines - Really enjoyed the read! All the very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/5/2017 10:18:00 AM

You present such deep verses that must come from a kind and romantic heart my friend! I have never read a poem by you that was not top class and inspiring!A7 Added to my fav list my friend.. Thanks..

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/16/2016 7:20:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! A wondrous, stark, and compelling write indeed. Most Excellent as always my dear friend. The imagery and power of your verses dazzle and excite the reader's imagination here for sure!! Cheers, Best, and Merry Christmas!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/15/2016 6:19:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^