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Inspired by Laura Loo

Once Upon a Time

ONCE UPON A TIME

I felt bold, placing an Ad in New York's Village Voice; see
I needed a friend, a guide, a conscientious lover of my choice

But as I read and read, one unusual two page letter
Stated that they'd be my slave, and loyal house sitter

That was start and end of that; but meanwhile,
I met a lonely young woman wanting to commit suicide

I showed her warmth, serenity, and rest; then I went to work
Leaving her with view of Hudson River, and lush trees in the park

That summer, I introduced her to her very own cozy space
Next door. Lo and behold, she found and looked like grace

One afternoon, as I hurried to fetch my usual subway train
This once lonely girl stopped to model her gold engagement ring

She stood hand in hand, with a spectacled gentleman I'd seen, so
I simply smiled, said farewell, and played back tapes of old scenes.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 6, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Thank you for the wonderful reply. LINDA
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February 6, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Iris, your path was really something. To give a person a friend when in need is the best thing we can do. Especially when times are as bad as the one time, you met the young lady. God, sent you there. A blessing to read how everything turned out for her love Linda...
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February 6, 2016 at 4:36 PM
I'm sure it's all etched on fabric of her mind. Thank you dear one. What captivating smile you possess. A lady in church; as a matter of fact quite often I am told the sun comes out when I smile.
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