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For Plucky Two By Nine Contest

Written on 2/9/2015

Once Upon a Time

Once upon a time, a King sang a song
A voice so fine, making a Princess' heart rejoice
But still in school, she sat against her will
Sitting, wishing to retreat to him, his lips kissing
Alas, undiscovered, this true gem pined and suffered
The wise king, whose intelligence, known far and wide
Searched diligently, for a blessed maiden to come willingly
Then, behold, a guiding light leading to her home
Her laughter, his strength, their love endured ever after. 



Written on 2/9/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 30, 2015 at 7:54 PM
LAURA, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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April 30, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Thanks, Skat! You are so kind to always comment when I place in a contest :) I appreciate your care and support. It makes me want to keep writing! Hugs, Laura :)
Allison Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 6:23 PM
many congrats Laura - a great poem - Vienna set us quite a challenge! Hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 6:44 PM
Thanks, Jan! It was a hard contest to write for, and I'm surprised I got in there with a placement! Congrats again on your win as well!
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April 30, 2015 at 6:11 PM
You did a wonderful job with this difficult poetry assignment of using special rhymes and words, Laura! Love the way you did this! My heartfelt congratulations to you on your podium 3rd Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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April 30, 2015 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, dear Sandra! You also did well on some of your recent wins, which I read (and just commented on). I am surprised I even got a placement in this one...it was hard!
Smith Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Just like that!.. This should do great in the contest! Hope to see it entered.. Hugs.. Arlene
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February 10, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Why, thanks Arlene! It's a rather simplistic poem, but as you know, I was trying to do it to format, which wasn't easy! ;)
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