Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Once Upon a Time -

Out of love foretold
in thousands
secret raptures from the old
Illusions coves for their powerful voices
A place where our ancestors once walked

Where trees listening
and disperse seeds of hope
Creation marvelous portrait
About the harmony - it is said
that it can develop strong band

It is a reality that can
compare with the wildest imagination
Ancient villages built of marble and stone
Wind chimes a rhythm that beckons
Mystery melody that asks us to join







13.11.2014
A-L Andresen :)
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Phyllis Babcock January 4, 2015 at 10:27 PM Just heading to bed and enjoyed reading this lovely piece. It is a very cold day and we are hitting -45 C tonight so did not go outside all day. Hope you had a wonderful holiday season. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2015 at 3:27 AM - Stay warm ....... do not get chilled, dear Phyllis ..... br...rrrrr..rr soooo cold !!!- Thanks for the nice visit - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan December 30, 2014 at 3:51 PM Well this sparks the imagination of days of old. Happy New Year Anne oxox Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2014 at 4:29 PM - Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Debbie - Happy New Year :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lesley Micuda December 15, 2014 at 3:02 PM stunning! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2014 at 1:07 AM - Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Lesley :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Whispering Plants December 8, 2014 at 8:40 PM Hi, I found this poem really refreshing and it made me remembered what is reality, maybe that's why I chose this, you're a really good poet, I wish to read more of your poetry. -Whispering plants Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2014 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem W.P. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton November 22, 2014 at 1:13 PM Nice to read your verse today. I will return after the first of the year to hold contests and have prizes. The circle of writers that I usually read, you were among whether I gave comment to or not. I'm different. Not really here for the most popularity contest, that would be my boyfriend at one time.. take care, reading a brand new circle of writers, I've been here awhile. I'll make my way back a day hopefully :) Thanks for your kind words on my poetry, I try to avoid remarks... Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 7:07 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments - a pleasure to see you Cindy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Britt Rose November 17, 2014 at 9:54 PM Wow... you whisked me away with so few but so beautiful of words. Incredible, really Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2014 at 3:17 AM - Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Britt :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton November 17, 2014 at 12:17 PM mysterious and enchanting Anne Lise ty for visiting my page hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 12:18 PM - Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem Shadow :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 17, 2014 at 10:28 AM Hay! what you are and who you are? I never miss myself saying you lovely lovely friend surely. A great philosophy, visionary..... and many things you have expressed simply with simple words. My lovely lovely friend of always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 11:54 AM - Thank you for your lovely visits and comments on my poem dear friend Bl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak November 16, 2014 at 6:21 AM Love it! What was...is, if we only open our hearts to feel it. Your beginning and ending are perfect brackets for the poem "Out of love foretold...a mystery melody for us to join. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 6:35 AM - Dear Monterey, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff November 16, 2014 at 3:28 AM Wonderful Anne Lise! all living entities emit vibrations (soul communication) and deserve equal respect...tho man has intellect, does not mean our vibrations are superior...Native American culture understands this...western culture does not....more humans are awakening to this harmonious truth, is it in time? hard to predict, we are in a 2-years time period of monumental change in mankind's history, love is the answer, jmg Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 5:00 AM - Much wisdom comes from Native American culture, James ! :) Thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso November 15, 2014 at 9:14 PM I just knew from the title I was going to love this one, and I sure did! Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 5:04 AM - Arthur, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman November 15, 2014 at 8:42 PM Anne-Lise, A most imaginative write here indeed. Enjoyed the flow of the words and the images you presented. Totally Enchanting!! A Big "7" on this one and it's a FAV too!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 5:07 AM - Gary, thank you for your visit, comments,"Big 7" and fave on my poem - "Once upon a time" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan November 15, 2014 at 6:39 PM So beautiful Anne Lise, imagination at it's best, loved it take care my dear.....Vera......... Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 5:05 AM - Dear Vera, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus November 15, 2014 at 2:41 PM I will join you anytime on the wings of fantasy, Anne Lise! Let the wind chimes play an enchanting melody! /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2014 at 3:30 PM - Paul, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll November 15, 2014 at 12:49 PM Great write Anne! Hope all is well... Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2014 at 12:53 PM - Ken, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez November 14, 2014 at 5:54 PM Charming, enchanting...your words transported me through time and space I'd want to be...just super, Anne-Lise! Kim ;) Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2014 at 6:53 AM - Kim, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami November 14, 2014 at 1:51 PM Super creation...Once upon a time you were the queen in those ancient villages...Best to you... Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2014 at 6:52 AM - Sandip, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2014 at 10:20 AM Wind chimes a rhythm that beckons Mystery melody that asks us to join...I especially like these lines..Way to go with this one..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 11:56 AM - Sara, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 14, 2014 at 7:58 AM Wonderful write Anne...I love the last 2 lines...Love Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 8:02 AM - Joseph, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 14, 2014 at 6:22 AM and yes, you mystify, anne... lovely Friday to you!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 7:40 AM - Nette, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 14, 2014 at 4:53 AM really very beautifully penned anne lise an excellent pen flowing excellent piece Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 7:40 AM - Liam, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donovan Willis November 13, 2014 at 11:58 PM Great write. Deep and intriguing... Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 7:39 AM - Donovan, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 13, 2014 at 3:32 PM stunning and enchanting Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 7:39 AM - Jan, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith November 13, 2014 at 2:43 PM Sounds like an enchanting place...hugs tim Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 7:39 AM - Tim, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jaidah Stroche November 13, 2014 at 2:00 PM I really like this one. Most likely a favorite of mine! It is a very creative and elaborate wording. ~JAIDAH~ Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2014 at 7:38 AM - Jaidah, thank you for your visit and comments on my poems - Once upon a time - // Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)