Premiere Contest WinnerOnce Upon a Time

They worked at the same place,
A place of no space,
Always running into each other they did,
Bottled crushes, with a tight lid,
Asked out, 
Joy shout,
Lovely first date,
Neither were late,
10 months, moved in together,
Hope as light as a feather,
Met his mother, 
Met her brother,
Family dinner,
Lottery winner,
They bought a bigger home, 
With heaps of space to roam, 
From the pound a dog,
Who's past was a traumatized fog,
Trained and loved,
Never shoved,
2 years now, 
On knee and bow,
Engagement ring,
Very bling,
Happiness, wedding day drawing near,
Neither showing signs of fear,
White dress, down the aisle,
White suit, lots of style,
Newley weds,
New threads,
Of a new life,
Husband and wife,
They planned their honeymoon, away they go,
Enjoying their time, taking is slow,
Home again,
Pick up the pen,
Start the scrap book,
With ultrasounds that she took,
Tiny heart beats, yes there's 2,
Even though the months are still few,
He gets a new job, lots of money,
Life was looking very sunny,
Half cake blue, half cake pink,
2 names, they have to think,
Room painted and made,
With each other, there glad they stayed,
2 months not long now,
Cute bib that says pow,
Baby clothes shopping, right away,
They will be back soon dog, stay,
Home sweet home, 3 weeks to go,
Need 2 crips, that's all though,
Home alone, twins come a week before,
Open, shut car door,
Drive herself to get there,
Tiny feet kicks, don't you dare,
Turn the corner, car crash,
Window screen is the first to smash,
Jolt forward, hit head,
Blood seeping, staining red,
3 heartbeats stop, husband is told,
Suicide committed, another life folds,
Dog waits at home, all alone,
As gravestones are added, gray zone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Seeker Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Suicide is never a good option but well, it can happen when no one is there to hold our hand. A trophy winner, I see, congratulations, well narrated tragic tale
Bird Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 10:47 PM
It does happen sometimes, thanks for commenting and the congratulations! - Phoenix :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 4:31 PM
So many dreams ending so tragically! Congratulations on your win! Turns out each day is a treasure! Blessings Fire Bird rising like a Phoenix.
Bird Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Sam! Each day is a treasure, and you should hold GOOD memories close. - Phoenix :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Such a sad write! I felt a tragedy coming but oh the heartache. The dog encapsulates the tragedy. Congratulations on your win…though happiness turns, your poem was well done indeed!
Bird Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Kim, it is quite a tragic story, but it shows that our loved ones mean the world to us. - Phoenix :)
Cozart Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 6:39 AM
How tragic.
Bird Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Yes, it is. - Phoenix :)
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Glad to see this as a trophy winner, FB, congratulations:)
Bird Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Joanna! - Phoenix :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:06 AM
Congrats. Your poem is like a adventure tale, but the end is pure hell... so very sad but so glad it won. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Bird Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Thank you, Gina, the ending is sad, but it happens sometimes. Thank you for the comment! - Phoenix :)
Poet Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 10:24 PM
Amazing story that took me on an emotional journey and left me breathless. The ending was bittersweet and made me feel a lot of sadness, however. Nonetheless, I feel compelled to offer my sincerest congrats on your trophy win, which is a clear indication of the extraordinary skill and hard work you have put into this quest.
Bird Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 10:26 PM
Hi Sotto Poet, thank you for your comment and your praise, I am glad you liked this poem! - Phoenix :)
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
Bird Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Karen!
Bahr Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 12:39 AM
That is such a story, sad but it does happen. well written.
Bird Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Thanks! - Phoenix :)
Daniel Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:06 AM
Oh my! This took me on a roller coaster ride, what a story! A really painful ending though..
Bird Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Yes, it is, I wish we could live without our loved ones, but sometimes we can't. - Phoenix :)
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