Once Upon a Time

thriving at her birth the chimes melodic cherry swan suddenly breathless is time an orphan’s carriage on squeaky wheels defies switch once upon a time begins 1/9/2023
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Ah, delicate and pretty!
Romios Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 11:17 AM
A thoughtful piece! Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 1:42 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Seems like a fairy tale. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Truly! :)
Eslinger Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:01 AM
I have, with love, put much study into Faery Tales. The KEY to a feary tale working is, no matter how outrageous the characters or happenings, the reactions & responses MUST be viable in Fealty as we know it, ie. Loving Kisses bring Response, so CAN awaken a person from stupor sleep caused by a poision apple prepared by a Witch. Even the youngest child knows this. Thus, your poem caused me repeated readings, touched me near tears…it seems not only a “once a time begins,” but,also in itself, a n’er ending story! Breathless hugs…. sally
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much, Sally! Hugs!
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