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Once Upon a Poem

Once upon a poem she soundly slept Moonlit waters flowing Sirius glowing... Rooster chimed in unwelcome intruder Daylight summoned ~ the poem eludes her

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Date: 3/6/2025 2:04:00 PM
Great novels also buried forever. I wonder where those poems end up.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:35:00 PM
Great question, Hilda. And are the pillows gonna be alright? lol. :) gw
Date: 3/6/2025 1:21:00 PM
What an amazing book it would be if we could write down all those poems left in dreamland.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:36:00 PM
Gotta 'drain the air' and collect some samples!
Date: 3/6/2025 12:57:00 PM
I love this. Can even signify a poem you are holding onto, in your head, until you get home, but it falls flat.
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Date: 3/6/2025 10:16:00 AM
A wonderful write. We never know where or when a poem will come to us. Have a great and blessed day writing away....................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:44:00 PM
I agree, Pa---- oops, a poem jest came to me. Gotta fly. lol. ~ Unev R. Noe
Date: 3/6/2025 9:23:00 AM
Too bad. She probably would have written a great poem. Good one Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:46:00 PM
So many poems 'lost' forever, eh? ~ Great Thoughts
Date: 3/6/2025 4:03:00 AM
Oh, isn't that the truth Gershon! She needs to sleep with a notepad and pen at her elbow and scrawl it in the dark, I did that for a while, lol!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:51:00 PM
I always mean to do that too, Bj. Then I do and am too lazy to pick up the pen anyway. lol.
Date: 3/6/2025 12:50:00 AM
Sounds like my typical day Gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:52:00 PM
So, Michael: I hadn't realized that your typical 'day' is at night. Insigh D Oat
Date: 3/5/2025 10:04:00 PM
Aw this is lovely
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/6/2025 8:51:00 PM
Aw, I love your comment, Karen. Thanks a million. ~ Gershon

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