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Once Upon a Mind..

Blackness fills the mind, as saddness decends. Feeling incompetent, I cannot make amends. Thoughts swirl, inside my mind... Of Ideas and actions, not yet defined. I would like to feel again and be free. That is not, right now; a possibilty. Trapped in this mental cage, for now. Hoping to get help somehow. If I should ever die, I'm the owner.. Give someone else a chance, I'm a organ donar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2009 8:46:00 AM
Terrific write with this piece. I loved many lines ...trapped in mental cage...the last two lines are great..this is well thoughtout piece that shines.
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