Once Upon a Drunken Time

Awake in a daze,
I think I’m still drunk.	
What the hell is happening?
I gotta get outta this funk.

Who is lying next to me?
Thank God, my clothes are on.	 
Where did the sunlight go?
Oh…it’s only dawn. 

I thought I left the club,
With my friends behind in tow.	
How did I end up alone
With…I think his name, Joe?
Ugh! What a ho!

“Hey you need to leave”
I say to this guy.
“Uh…sure, yea… okay”
He says in reply.

Rap, Rap, Rap,
I hear at the door.	 
Crap, who is that?
As I step onto the floor.
“Go out my window!”
I frantically say
“What! Are you crazy?”
“Just shut up, obey!”

I force the sill open,
Say a quick bye.
He says, “Can I see you again?” 
I say, “No! Now goodbye!”

A quick look in the mirror,
Oh God, I’m a wreck.		 
Head straight for the door,
Open it onto the deck.

“What a night, eh?”
My neighbor declares.
“Yea, what happened?”
I say in a stare.

“Actually,” I interrupt,
“I don’t want to know.
By the way, I need to go. 
I’ll see you later on this morn.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Clark Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 3:15 PM
It is always tough to write something embarrassing about yourself. It takes true strength. I like you more and more the more I read.
Brandt Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 12:52 AM
Ha ha, thanks...I have learned not to care what people think...it is what it is, and I am who I am ;)
Pettit Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 12:29 AM
Monique, that is an experience hardly unique. On that morning, you must have felt like hell. The words you have used describe it very well.
Brandt Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 12:49 AM
Hell is mild to describe What I really felt inside. *Monique
Pietersen Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 12:14 PM
nice and drunk hey...quite funny
Brandt Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Thanks Willem :) *Monique
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 11:17 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Monique. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Palmer Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:55 AM
now what did you do,hope it doesn't come back to haunt you,nice write Monique
Brandt Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Nah, I'm sober now- have been for a little while. Thank you =)
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