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Once Upon a Dream

Once upon a dream Where rainbows are all a gleam Land filled with rich green Treasures found in every stream Once upon a dream Friends and enemies were once a team No request was too extreme But things aren't always what they seem In the land of a magnificent kingdom Stands a castle full of boredom In the corridors are cries of a princess Held captive inside the enemy's fortress Trapped inside a gloomy dungeon And accompanied by a flock of pigeon The princess lay sleepless day & night Hoping for a savior, a prince or a knight Our little tale's coming to an end A knight in shining armor came in to defend The damsel in distress which he calls his friend Once upon a dream and all this came to an end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/1/2016 9:08:00 AM
Eunice, nice to see this one again. After reading all your poems, I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 7/14/2016 4:33:00 AM
Thank you! Your comments meant a lot to me :D As much as possible I try to write poems whenever I get the time to or when inspiration strikes me in random situations.
Date: 3/31/2016 10:26:00 AM
Hi Eunice, i did Love this beautiful read, it did read as a fantasy dream. A deep write Eunice, the words just have such a gentle flow. An excellent piece Eunice. The dream does sing. Great first write, i actually like these kinds of writes so i am putting this one in my faves....Vlad.
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 4/5/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 1/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for all your welcome comments :D I just know that I'll be able to meet more great poets through this site. Once my schedule's a bit less hectic, I'll be posting more poems of mine. Criticisms are widely accepted because I want to learn from other great poets such as yourselves. God bless everyone ^_^
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:56:00 AM
Eunice, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 1/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks :) I'll be reading your poems as well if I get the time to ^_^
Date: 1/18/2015 1:27:00 PM
Hi Eunice.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes in 2015.. HAPPY NEW YEAR! Please take time to check me out, ok!
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 1/28/2015 8:22:00 AM
Thank you :) This was actually my first constructed poem (way back 6th grade). So glad that many were able to appreciate it.
Date: 1/18/2015 7:11:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Eunice - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 7/14/2016 4:33:00 AM
Thank you! :D
Date: 1/15/2015 11:54:00 PM
Exactly what I had thought when i read it... As if a sad and lonely school girl dreams of a different world... Waiting for her prince charming:)
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Date: 1/15/2015 10:01:00 AM
Einice, this is deep,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:28:00 AM
Hi everyone! I have added some lines to this poem. Feel free to share your insights :D
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:32:00 AM
Nice lines!!! It happens only in a dream:)... best wishes .. nadiya
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poesy relish
Date: 1/15/2015 10:47:00 AM
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 1/15/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thank you :) I did this when I was still in the 6th grade. Always kept it written in a notebook and now I decided to share it with everyone ^_^
Date: 1/15/2015 8:25:00 AM
This is beautiful! I loved it!
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Eunice Adrados
Date: 7/14/2016 4:34:00 AM
Thank you so much :)