Euni- verse Poet Rhyme

Once Upon a Dream

Once upon a dream
Where rainbows are all a gleam
Land filled with rich green
Treasures found in every stream

Once upon a dream 
Friends and enemies were once a team
No request was too extreme
But things aren't always what they seem

In the land of a magnificent kingdom
Stands a castle full of boredom
In the corridors are cries of a princess
Held captive inside the enemy's fortress

Trapped inside a gloomy dungeon
And accompanied by a flock of pigeon
The princess lay sleepless day & night
Hoping for a savior, a prince or a knight

Our little tale's coming to an end
A knight in shining armor came in to defend
The damsel in distress which he calls his friend
Once upon a dream and all this came to an end.

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Skat A July 1, 2016 at 9:08 AM Eunice, nice to see this one again. After reading all your poems, I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT* Euni- verse July 14, 2016 at 4:33 AM Thank you! Your comments meant a lot to me :D As much as possible I try to write poems whenever I get the time to or when inspiration strikes me in random situations.

Vladislav Raven March 31, 2016 at 10:26 AM Hi Eunice, i did Love this beautiful read, it did read as a fantasy dream. A deep write Eunice, the words just have such a gentle flow. An excellent piece Eunice. The dream does sing. Great first write, i actually like these kinds of writes so i am putting this one in my faves....Vlad. Euni- verse April 5, 2016 at 1:39 AM Thank you so much :)

Euni- verse January 28, 2015 at 8:20 AM Thank you so much for all your welcome comments :D I just know that I'll be able to meet more great poets through this site. Once my schedule's a bit less hectic, I'll be posting more poems of mine. Criticisms are widely accepted because I want to learn from other great poets such as yourselves. God bless everyone ^_^

Skat A January 24, 2015 at 6:56 AM Eunice, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Euni- verse January 28, 2015 at 8:20 AM Thanks :) I'll be reading your poems as well if I get the time to ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2015 at 7:11 AM - A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Eunice - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :) Euni- verse July 14, 2016 at 4:33 AM Thank you! :D

Poesy Relish January 15, 2015 at 11:54 PM Exactly what I had thought when i read it... As if a sad and lonely school girl dreams of a different world... Waiting for her prince charming:)

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 10:01 AM Einice, this is deep,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Euni- verse January 15, 2015 at 9:28 AM Hi everyone! I have added some lines to this poem. Feel free to share your insights :D

Poesy Relish January 15, 2015 at 8:32 AM Nice lines!!! It happens only in a dream:)... best wishes .. nadiya Poesy Relish January 15, 2015 at 10:47 AM Euni- verse January 15, 2015 at 8:44 AM Thank you :) I did this when I was still in the 6th grade. Always kept it written in a notebook and now I decided to share it with everyone ^_^

Meg Anderson January 15, 2015 at 8:25 AM This is beautiful! I loved it! Euni- verse July 14, 2016 at 4:34 AM Thank you so much :)