Once Upon a Dream

Once upon a dream Where rainbows are all a gleam Land filled with rich green Treasures found in every stream Once upon a dream Friends and enemies were once a team No request was too extreme But things aren't always what they seem In the land of a magnificent kingdom Stands a castle full of boredom In the corridors are cries of a princess Held captive inside the enemy's fortress Trapped inside a gloomy dungeon And accompanied by a flock of pigeon The princess lay sleepless day & night Hoping for a savior, a prince or a knight Our little tale's coming to an end A knight in shining armor came in to defend The damsel in distress which he calls his friend Once upon a dream and all this came to an end.

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Date: 7/1/2016 9:08:00 AM
Eunice, nice to see this one again. After reading all your poems, I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:33:00 AM
Thank you! Your comments meant a lot to me :D As much as possible I try to write poems whenever I get the time to or when inspiration strikes me in random situations.
Date: 3/31/2016 10:26:00 AM
Hi Eunice, i did Love this beautiful read, it did read as a fantasy dream. A deep write Eunice, the words just have such a gentle flow. An excellent piece Eunice. The dream does sing. Great first write, i actually like these kinds of writes so i am putting this one in my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 4/5/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 1/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for all your welcome comments :D I just know that I'll be able to meet more great poets through this site. Once my schedule's a bit less hectic, I'll be posting more poems of mine. Criticisms are widely accepted because I want to learn from other great poets such as yourselves. God bless everyone ^_^
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:56:00 AM
Eunice, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks :) I'll be reading your poems as well if I get the time to ^_^
Date: 1/18/2015 7:11:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Eunice - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:33:00 AM
Thank you! :D
Date: 1/15/2015 11:54:00 PM
Exactly what I had thought when i read it... As if a sad and lonely school girl dreams of a different world... Waiting for her prince charming:)
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Date: 1/15/2015 10:01:00 AM
Einice, this is deep,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:28:00 AM
Hi everyone! I have added some lines to this poem. Feel free to share your insights :D
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:32:00 AM
Nice lines!!! It happens only in a dream:)... best wishes .. nadiya
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Date: 1/15/2015 10:47:00 AM
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thank you :) I did this when I was still in the 6th grade. Always kept it written in a notebook and now I decided to share it with everyone ^_^
Date: 1/15/2015 8:25:00 AM
This is beautiful! I loved it!
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:34:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
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