Once Upon a Dream

Once upon a dream,
in twilight’s fragile seam,
I heard a dragon cry—
not fury, but a fractured hymn
torn loose across the sky.

Its scales, like shattered constellations,
dimmed beneath a trembling blade;
a sword of silver sorrow fell,
and through its ancient heart was laid.

Once upon a dream,
a glimmer split the dark—
not death, but some becoming spark.
A beam of molten, gilded fire
descended where the beast had lain,
like dusk dissolving into dawn,
like grief transfigured into flame.

Once upon a dream,
I saw the tome unseal—
a relic wrought of whispered time,
its ink alive, its truths revealed.
Each page a breath of something older,
each word a quiet, sovereign power,
that spoke of endings dressed as ashes
and rebirths cloaked in ruin’s hour.

Once upon a dream,
the heavens seemed to bend—
the air grew thick with unseen hands
that shaped both breaking and transcend.
The dragon’s form, once pierced and fallen,
did not succumb to mortal end;
it shed its pain like weathered skin
and rose—remade, refined, unpenned.

Once upon a dream,
the witching hour took hold;
the daylight fled in reverent hush,
the world grew hushed; the dark grew bold.
Yet in that deep and hollow silence,
where lesser hearts might learn to fear,
there stirred a pulse beneath the ruin—
a strength that only night makes clear.

Once upon a dream,
I watched with widening sight
as what was slain refused the grave
and gathered shadow into might.
Its wings, once torn, unfurled like scripture
written in a fiercer hand;
its breath no longer born of anguish,
but forged by trials it could withstand.

Once upon a dream,
I woke—but not the same.
The echoes lingered in my bones,
a quiet, consecrated flame.
For what is loss, if not a doorway?
What is breaking, if not art?
What seems an ending in the body
may be an awakening of the heart.

Once upon a dream,
I came to understand:
nothing perishes to nothing—
it merely shifts at fate’s command.
The dragon did not die that night,
nor did its fire depart—
it only shed its former self
to rise more sovereign than it was.

And so, within the hidden chambers
where my own undoing's gleam,
I carry still that ancient knowing—
first whispered once…

…upon a dream.
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Radice Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:40 AM
I read Charles' comments below and agree with him Jennifer that you are a great storyteller and certainly a very accomplished poet. This is another great read. I like your use of repetition too. Where I do have to respectfully disagree with Charles though is your use of the word 'And". In the context of your excellent rhyming poem I feel the word adds to the overall tone and pacing of the piece. Just my own thoughts. Cheers - Gary
Wallace Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, Gary! I really appreciate both your kind words and your thoughtful perspective. I was grateful for Charles' suggestion, and I also appreciate hearing why you felt the repetition and pacing worked as written. One of the things I love about poetry is that two experienced readers can see the same line differently. Thank you for such a generous comment.
Reese Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 7:41 AM
You really are an awesome story teller I normally do not read long poems or free verse poems as both tend to bore me but was captivated by this lovely write you touched on many things I like such as dragons resurrection and redemption beautifully you are quite accomplished I would like to make one small suggestion that was given to me but one of my teachers of poetry don't start a line with AND it is just a filler word giving no imagery to the poem all and all an awesome write I will read more
Wallace Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:10 PM
Thank you so much for reading it and for your incredibly kind words. It means a lot to know the story carried you through, especially since longer free verse poems aren't usually your style. I truly appreciate the encouragement. Thank you also for sharing the advice about beginning a line with "and." I enjoy learning from other poets and will certainly keep that in mind as I continue to grow. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work as well.
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