Once Upon a Dark Fog

Where the trees once stood,
A dark fog covers their grounds-
                    A path through lost lives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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June 13, 2015 at 7:23 PM
thanks for the deep imagery
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May 11, 2009 at 11:18 PM
My new haiku friend, nice 5/7/5 flow. I love writing haiku's too. I invite you to read some of my work, I'm going to add you to my favorite poets...Raul
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