Juli- Michelle Poet Free verse

Once Upon a Car Ride

Feel like that woman
Screaming, he betrays
They're stealing her
They're taking her
And everything shes kept safe
He Can't protect her
Not strong enough
Not brave enough
Nor man enough
To understand her horror
And how she will remember
The rest of her life

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Harry Horsman April 21, 2020 at 9:17 PM Hi Juli, hope you are still with us here on soup..Just rambling through my favourites poems list,,came across this powerful gem from 2012..Keep safe...Harry.

Harry Horsman October 26, 2012 at 2:55 PM wow Juli, this is powerful, deeply emotional, and needed to be written. remember for all the wrong reasons... the fact that she is the victim, is soon forgotten, in this weird world.. this is the first poem i've read of you. and to my fav you go..

Carol Sunshine Brown October 26, 2012 at 5:53 AM What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Juli-. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX