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Once More

I sat behind him He looked over to the side I saw his lashes My heart clashes They're so curly That I fell there surely His eyes shine brightly Full of life Free of strife When he woke up from sleep I wish to swim in that pool of red sea How I wish to never forget that bliss! We locked eyes I felt it hard to turn I got captivated like I was never before How I wish to get lost in there! In those brown orbs , forever, So enchanting ,yet warm and gracious, And the crinkles when he smiles Behind lies great sorrows and hurdles Still looks innocent when he sleeps I just want to look at him once more To look into his eyes To relive everything To say goodbye , Just once more.

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Date: 7/18/2023 10:44:00 PM
Soulful and expressive, Atchaya ' hold onto What is good, let your spirit feed on the positìve' I see Beata and I are choosing the same poems To comment on and both from new writers ' How strange it that ? All the best wishes '
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Date: 6/21/2023 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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