Once Love So Real, Now Mere Echo

Sullen gray-and-black leaden fingers unclosing against vast sky, cause the outside world seems to run away in grim silence. Once love so real, now mere echo in the weak moonlight rays as fragrant gold flaming honeysuckle vines bound into a braid around too narrow garden bower. I sit on a settee, in the pavilion, my head down with cherishing sadness.
8/22/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Eve, I was captivated by the poignant imagery of your poem, as I too, was cherishing the sadness. An expressive and intimate portrait of grief. Thank you for sharing your heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:03 PM
I enjoyed reading your winning poem. Congrats Eve.
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Very nice Eve congrats on a fine win!
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:10 PM
a double treat of a nonet soaring with mellow tones of grief, eve... ever lovely!...huggs
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Beautifully sad Eve. I love what you have crafted here
Cunningham Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 2:26 AM
The tale of fading love, love the layout Eve. If it's for a contest good luck. Tom.
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