Once In a Lifetime

They're once in a lifetime These moments of joy The first time you rattle That colourful new toy Your first day at school With the rest of the kids Your hair all slicked down Bad smells Mom got rid The ultimate joy Of your first tender kiss The shock when she tells you Her monthly she missed A puff from a cigarette Makes you dizzy and ill The beer in the closet I remember it still The joy of first child The smell of their skin The softness of touch Their sweet tiny grin Your first big promotion The raise that you get The first time you notice A grey hair NO NOT YET! Middle age then follows With a sickening thud It's all over now Your life is pure crud The sixties are next And retirement awaits Where did it go You're in a hell of a state Then someone says wryly "You've had a good life Whatcha crabbing about?" It still cuts like a knife These tender sweet moments You experience through time You'll remember them fondly And treasure the climb So hold on to them tightly They won't come again They're once in a lifetime They're to treasure my friend © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 8/2/2014 10:36:00 AM
Jack, I find this is the best time of my life; some of my responsibilities have fallen away and I am more free to write and do the things I truly love. It will not come again for sure. Enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:04:00 AM
Hello Faye... always happy to make new friends! Loving hugs XOX
Date: 8/2/2014 10:04:00 AM
I find the older I get... The more content I am. I was 40 when I had my son. 52 when I got my pacemakers and was able to get along. I found Dragon only a few years back. At the same time as I found Jack. I now have the moments to spend with my pets. I'm no longer trying to reach some hard goal. Yes life has become sweeter as I near the final lifting of my soul. Then God will be there and the rest I will know.. Honestly Dragon! Don't cry... I'm not dead yet! I'll be staying a long while, yet.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/2/2014 11:00:00 AM
You sound quite comfortable in your own skin much like me! Two of a kind... loving huggsies! XOX
Date: 8/2/2014 8:53:00 AM
Life flies by my friend. Savor all the little moments...excellent Tim
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Date: 8/2/2014 9:28:00 AM
You are always so supportive, my friend! Thank you Tim!
Date: 8/2/2014 8:25:00 AM
I m overwhelmed Jack! Such an emotive write ,, true n will touch every reader,, we r all still climbing up n looking back n down the sweet path we hv traversed ,, thanks for a very precious gift !
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Date: 8/2/2014 9:27:00 AM
You are very sweet my dear Upma... thank you very much! Your kind words are very much appreciated! XOXOX
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