Once In a Blue Moon

A solitary man was he 
who shunned responsibility 
and crawled back to his empty shell, 
he thought himself alive and well. 
He spurned an opportunity 
for love in perpetuity, 
instead his nervousness took hold, 
he lost the yearning to be bold. 

As weeks went by he grew, imbued 
with loneliness and solitude, 
but not with laughter or the joy 
he well remembered as a boy. 
He grew morose, and disinclined 
to mix with others of his kind, 
he shut himself away with books, 
avoiding disapproving looks. 

Perhaps one day he'll realize 
commitment is a larger prize, 
that the way to win a heart 
is not to run, to be apart. 
He hopes that day is dawning soon, 
but, perhaps, it's like the blue moon 
waiting for its time to rise 
so infrequently before his eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/12/2016 8:09:00 AM
every opportunity we don't take....is indeed a mistake....even worse than a wrong decision we make....because Life has no meaning without the Beautiful risk of heartbreak....great work keith and very entertaining as well my friend....
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/12/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks fo the rhyming response my friend! Much appreciated... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 2/12/2016 8:07:00 AM
Beautifully penned rhyme but this is so sad Keith:-( The more withdrawn a person becomes the worse it is to break the cycle:-( hugs Jan xx7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/12/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for the 7 Jan, and for the insightful remarks! Best wishes, Keith
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