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Once I Was

Once I was a little girl, caught up in dreams
Coloring my world in hues of crimson blood
Flowing through my veins of glittering gold
Whispering feelings of mesmerizing insights
Into the inspirations created from my spirit

Once I was filled with brilliant tones of purple
Sighing with vivid arrays of soothing blue hope
Enchanting the warmth living within my heart
Reflecting soothing sincerity alive with serenity
Capturing my vision and revealing pieces of me

Once I was encouraged by the honesty I could see
Dancing, swaying softly, with a sense of empathy
Filling up the gentle embrace of a familiar place
Where I could see the satisfaction I believed to be
A part of me, the piece that imagines true reveries

Once I was delighted to be alive and free to exist
With shades of peaceful, misty frost, touching upon
Emerald and sapphire ridges and peaks where I knew
The difference between wisdom and knowledge, a walk
Through the combination of faith mingled with courage

Once I was growing stronger in my heart and soul
Discerning the changes that came about with miracles
That graced me with their amazing purity and creativity
Assurance that everything I could hope to be or believe
Would be wrapped up in shadows of promising fantasies

Once I was a fiery yearning breathing out truth and passion
Inspired by sensitivity and melancholy, rich sincerities
Murmuring touches of comfort through my depths
Portraying the essence of dedication and loyalty within
Lulling my anxieties to slumber and finally leave me

Once I was a little girl who only knew the meaning of hope
Through small instincts that left her with a passionate wish
For the moments filled with sincerity, acceptance and faith
The discerning of the spirit that would bring peace and grace
Feelings of security filled with a sure belief in God’s love for me





If this was my last poetry contest poem Poetry Contest
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July 17, 2020
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Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:31 AM
This is a fave for me Gina! Your muse fills my heart with sheer pleasure and ecstasy. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Regina, fantastic imagery in these beautiful poem, congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:53 AM
Wow epic poem, Regina. Well done. Congrats ~
Agustin Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Wow! Congrats! I'm so delighted with this, especially your concluding line: "Feelings of security filled with a sure belief in God’s love for me." God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:29 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:45 AM
This is a fantastic deep and emotive poem, but was not really what I was looking for in my contest... still placed it due to its brilliance... How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Watt Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 3:14 PM
I resonate with your feelings of peace brought about by the surety of God's love and grace. "Feelings of security filled with a sure belief in God’s love for me". Beautifully written, Gina. And may I add, congratulations on your recent wedding, and God's abundant blessings to you and your husband! ~ John
Lindley Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 10:46 AM
I truly do so stand in awe of this well crafted and magnificent piece my friend. A pleasure to have read and thus so enjoyed! A fav.. God bless...
Brul Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 1:03 AM
Wow, this will be a great legacy dear Regina...And I love to add this to my favourites!
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