Once I Sailed the Oceans

Once I sailed the Oceans, 
braving the blue cold water 
like a restless young shark, 
sea monsters meant naught 
and mermaids sang to me....

Once I flew thru the Skies 
freer than any eagle could, 
seeing the world below 
as heaven laid out for me 
while I soared and soared....

Once I walked the Earth, 
a small giant, a large grin,
as men stepped back 
and women came forward....

But now Time's tempered 
my once hot iron and cooled 
my fevered brain, and God 
has wrung me inside out 
till my soul shone its brilliance
and I hid my old face in shame, 
in shame, in shame....

Heaven and Hell are both gifts,
now I can see, fruit of the same tree,
the one Adam, Eve were told to flee....
And God gives so much, so much, and
so many chances, so many, many chances....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kauffman Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 1:28 PM
LJ, you write with a profound depth of wisdom honed by many birthdays - many births of perspective! Congratulations on your first place win - memory and reality perfectly joined! Blessings my friend!
Carber Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 11:51 AM
And may God bless you and yours as well, mi amiga! Much appreciated though I'm not sure that age brings wisdom-- maybe it's just making me cranky!
King  Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 5:32 AM
A Very good read and many extremely strong sentiment’s therein , I enjoyed it a lot
Carber Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Thank you Simon, I'm glad you liked it!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Hello L. J. Carber, I have just read this beautiful poem. the last verse speaks to me. have a nice day my friend.
Carber Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Darlene, you're very kind.
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 8:36 PM
This one speaks to me, and I imagine to so many others. Nicely done! ~ Gershon
Carber Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 7:20 PM
wow this is really great writing. I loved the symbolism in it. like Connie says, this is unique and I am gonna FAVE it
Carber Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Andrea-- from poets like you and Connie, I feel doubly honored!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Beautiful metaphors in this unique lovely poem Len. Respect to embrace old as gold! I loved it! : )
Carber Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Connie, much appreciated as always
Brewer Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 4:25 AM
After searching through the recent submissions of Soup poets who have impressed in the past, I regret to say: none appealed to me. Then this poem of yours touched my mind like a breath of fresh air on a bright morning. Your words not only please as words but give an intelligent message with clarity that I can understand. Bless you for that, Len.
Carber Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Thank you, my friend-- I can't fathom why so much contemporary poetry deliberately seeks to be obscure, when the timeless poets, Homer, Shakespeare, the Psalmists, Blake, Wordsworth, etc., were clear and 'simple' in comparison,yet their meanings were always profound and universal.
Gutmacher Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 3:00 PM
much enjoyed.
Carber Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks Jon, much appreciated!
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