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Once I Sailed the Oceans

Once I sailed the Oceans, braving the blue cold water like a restless young shark, sea monsters meant naught and mermaids sang to me.... Once I flew thru the Skies freer than any eagle could, seeing the world below as heaven laid out for me while I soared and soared.... Once I walked the Earth, a small giant, a large grin, as men stepped back and women came forward.... But now Time's tempered my once hot iron and cooled my fevered brain, and God has wrung me inside out till my soul shone its brilliance and I hid my old face in shame, in shame, in shame.... Heaven and Hell are both gifts, now I can see, fruit of the same tree, the one Adam, Eve were told to flee.... And God gives so much, so much, and so many chances, so many, many chances....

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Date: 1/28/2021 1:28:00 PM
LJ, you write with a profound depth of wisdom honed by many birthdays - many births of perspective! Congratulations on your first place win - memory and reality perfectly joined! Blessings my friend!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/29/2021 11:51:00 AM
And may God bless you and yours as well, mi amiga! Much appreciated though I'm not sure that age brings wisdom-- maybe it's just making me cranky!
Date: 4/4/2020 5:32:00 AM
A Very good read and many extremely strong sentiment’s therein , I enjoyed it a lot
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/4/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Simon, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 7/2/2019 1:08:00 PM
Hello L. J. Carber, I have just read this beautiful poem. the last verse speaks to me. have a nice day my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/3/2019 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene, you're very kind.
Date: 12/1/2018 8:36:00 PM
This one speaks to me, and I imagine to so many others. Nicely done! ~ Gershon
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/2/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Gershon
Date: 11/24/2018 7:20:00 PM
wow this is really great writing. I loved the symbolism in it. like Connie says, this is unique and I am gonna FAVE it
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/25/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea-- from poets like you and Connie, I feel doubly honored!
Date: 11/20/2018 2:47:00 PM
Beautiful metaphors in this unique lovely poem Len. Respect to embrace old as gold! I loved it! : )
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/21/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, much appreciated as always
Date: 11/13/2018 4:25:00 AM
After searching through the recent submissions of Soup poets who have impressed in the past, I regret to say: none appealed to me. Then this poem of yours touched my mind like a breath of fresh air on a bright morning. Your words not only please as words but give an intelligent message with clarity that I can understand. Bless you for that, Len.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/13/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, my friend-- I can't fathom why so much contemporary poetry deliberately seeks to be obscure, when the timeless poets, Homer, Shakespeare, the Psalmists, Blake, Wordsworth, etc., were clear and 'simple' in comparison,yet their meanings were always profound and universal.
Date: 11/11/2018 3:00:00 PM
much enjoyed.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/12/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Jon, much appreciated!

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