Once I Drank


Once I drank,
Know now I don't,
blissful lie,
now I won't.

Once I drank,
know now I can't,
thrice to die,
now I shan't.

Once I drank,
now I see,
life returned,
know now I'm me. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 12, 2013 at 4:05 AM
AH THATS INSPIRATIONAL
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December 12, 2013 at 4:12 AM
Thank you, it took me three times in hospital, once in a coma and way to much knocking on heavens door to finally wake up. If words could save ay!
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July 2, 2013 at 11:08 AM
I love this!!!!! Not afraid to express who you are and what you've been through..excellent testimony.
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November 29, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Nice... you to put your feelings into words and allow us to feel the overcoming feeling you felt. Thank you for sharing it us.
Debole Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 7:17 PM
Hi David - Don't know if this is true or not, but glad about the ending. Thanks for your comment about my poetry. - Gail
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