Once Around the Moon

The astral plane is leaving soon.
Once around the planet moon.
To capture hearts imagination.
A galaxonic fascination.

A feeling that seems alien.
Like ivory to Pygmalion.
With hopes hung up, upon a star.
You almost forget just where you are.

Atmospheric pressure fun.
Like being shot with a stun gun.
You'd think the end was soon to come.
But then you realize you're just numb.

Reentry can turn lives around.
When lovers find a common ground.
And hope begins to play a tune.
Of a trip once around the moon.

For Shadow Hamilton's Spaceship contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/8/2014 12:41:00 AM
just stopping by to say hi, Robert. I was gone from here a few days. it is always nice to catch up!!
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Date: 3/31/2014 10:14:00 PM
ROBERT, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA
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Date: 3/26/2014 3:48:00 AM
- I enjoyed your creative write in spaceship contest, Robert - Congrats on the nice win !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2014 10:28:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, robert
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Date: 3/25/2014 3:25:00 PM
congrats on placing Robert lovely poem hugs
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Date: 3/20/2014 9:10:00 PM
had to tell yyou, don't worry. I really do not have hiccups!! hahaha
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Date: 3/20/2014 4:10:00 PM
Well conceived and constructed piece Robert. Good luck in the contest. Andy
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Robert Johnson
Date: 3/20/2014 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Andy. I see that's what you go by. Peace. :)
Date: 3/20/2014 4:09:00 PM
Well conceived and constructed piece Robert. Good luck in the contest. Andy
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:06:00 PM
wow, Robert. you did a GREAT job with this theme. One of the best in that contest I'd say!
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Robert Johnson
Date: 3/20/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 3/19/2014 12:09:00 AM
very nice, its lively and I like it , because its for a contest I will correct you on one thing, it should say you're just numb ( not your)
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Robert Johnson
Date: 3/19/2014 12:26:00 AM
Thank you Francine, always nice to have an editor. Peace. :)
Date: 3/18/2014 11:50:00 PM
Good descriptive write with good rhyming. You used all the necessary words quite well.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 3/19/2014 12:28:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Robert. Appreciate your kind words. Peace. :) Although that Pygmalion was a bit of a strech. :)
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