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Once Around the Lake

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Once around the lake sweetheart
I'll take you here and there
All throughout the neighborhood
I'll show you everywhere
Where I have fondest memories
The places where I was
There's nothing like a memory
To do just what it does
And that is why I'll take you
I want for you to see
Then we can make some memories
Together, you and me

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/29/2024 3:44:00 AM

This is sweet and romantic. I remember my husband doing just this when we first met up, showing the scenes of his good memories. The poem has a nice flow with the rhythm and end rhyme. I love the first line especially, and then I like the ending (and the middle is lovely too!). A fave :)

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 1/29/2024 3:51:00 AM

Thank you