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Once Around the Lake

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Once around the lake sweetheart I'll take you here and there All throughout the neighborhood I'll show you everywhere Where I have fondest memories The places where I was There's nothing like a memory To do just what it does And that is why I'll take you I want for you to see Then we can make some memories Together, you and me

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/29/2024 3:44:00 AM

This is sweet and romantic. I remember my husband doing just this when we first met up, showing the scenes of his good memories. The poem has a nice flow with the rhythm and end rhyme. I love the first line especially, and then I like the ending (and the middle is lovely too!). A fave :)

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 1/29/2024 3:51:00 AM

Thank you