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I was just trying to remember the past
 trying to remember the good people
 and the bad people,
 that i came across on my way,

i want you to know
that you are among the good people
 that left a good trace in my life,

once again i just want to say thank you
for passing through my life,
is so short but is wonderful
i want you here forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 12/19/2012 12:39:00 PM
A well-written poem but you had a few typos. I'd really start to edit at least once or twice all of your lovely poems...
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Date: 12/19/2012 10:58:00 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Victor. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:47:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, so nice to read your write today. Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:07:00 PM
we all crave for the good things in life,great write Victor,and a warm welcome to the Soup
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:22:00 PM