Beautiful Scars Poet Tanka

Once Again

Romanticist you,
    Quality in expression,
         Indulged in excess,
            My dear sentimentalist,
                Believing in each other.

Sensitivity,
    Remarkable acuteness,
         Rivers connect, bridge,
             Our exciting devotion,
                  Amorousness love, desire.

Undeniable,
     Our sea will never run dry,
         Swim by our coral,
               Perched above our maple tree,
                    Falling in love once again.

Written By: Laura Urbaniak
      November 19, 2015

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Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2015 at 5:44 PM now THIS one has a totally different vibe to it, so I like to think you are in love and happy!! a sweet poem! Beautiful Scars November 19, 2015 at 6:02 PM oh yes! I am very much in love and happy!! I have my moments about all the loss in my life, but I will never be more grateful than I am today for my hubby :) I'm 35 and we've been together for 20 years. I am so blessed, with a 9 year old daughter too. Life can't get any better! :) Thank you for the kind words!! -lu

Daver Austin November 19, 2015 at 11:43 AM These are unusual your intense attempt at describing romantic love. Good stuff. Love, daver