Once Again

Rain drops fall down my face
Can't believe i'm here in this place again
Why do you keep crushing my
Already broken heart?
What do you get out of 
Seeing me in pain?
What is your reason
This time for telling me 
I'm no good?
Does it make you feel better
To know it's me you hurt?
Rain drop tears running down my face
I left here in pain
Once again.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 7, 2009 at 3:04 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Interesting questions. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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January 23, 2009 at 11:03 AM
Written really well, your emotions on paper, so beautifully. Thanks for all the comments! ~Jen~
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January 10, 2009 at 8:15 PM
Beautifully write!!thoughtfully expressed and good composure....Stay Strong...Tyesha
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January 10, 2009 at 7:52 AM
nice poem Breana lovely message...your friend Maryam
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January 9, 2009 at 9:52 PM
Good emotion, good flow, writting always helps to deal with pain and life emotions. The reader can feel your pain. Thanks for sharing, Judy Riley
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