Once a Tiny Child

Once A Tiny Child

Where once a tiny child walked
upon these wooden floors
now only wee shadows waltz
swiftly through the doors.

Finger prints are wiped away
with Kool-Aid grins and tears
where once a tiny child walked
and quickly disappeared.

Packed away in attic trunks
their teddy bears and toys
where once a tiny child walked
dear little girls and boys.

Time will never take away
the memories that remain
where once a tiny child walked
to make me smile again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 7/4/2019 11:41:00 AM
I did not realize this was a quatrain until I went back to the top to see. It is the truth in every way; and amazing how fast those little ones leave your nest. Wow! Great job!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 7/4/2019 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Caren. Now I am watching as my grand kids are growing up so fast! Time goes faster when you are older. Hugs, Susan
Date: 6/9/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hello Susan Jeavons, so nice to meet you. Children do grow up fast, Before you know it , you will be a grandma. Have a nice day my friend.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 6/10/2019 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. I am already a Great Grandma to 5 and Grandma to 11. You have a great day too. Blessings, Susan
Date: 5/29/2019 1:10:00 PM
Oh, boy, as a Mother and Grandmother, I know the feeling. With my grandson, it's a plus. Because he made shot videos of himself starting at age 4. He is now an AllStar in Little League, those videos are hysterical. Toys? Yes, I can relate to you. Loved your poem.. A FAV, should be a POTD, Susan! Hugsm Panagiota
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 5/29/2019 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it. I have 11 grandchildren and 5 great grandchildren! They keep us young! Hugs Panagiota. Susan
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