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Once a Pet

The wild dog had once been a pet so sweet,
but death came-  and he was now on the street;
he wandered alone, hungry, and confused,
never had this dog ever been abused.
Now, people kicked him until he was bruised,
he soon became feral-   so he could eat.

He slept in doorways and sometimes on grass,
on the soft grass-  he watched the people pass;
one dark, dark night he met dogs in a gang,
and from then on with the gang-  he did hang.
On the city streets they barked loud and sang,
then, one night he got cut with broken glass.

He was bleeding badly and feeling weak,
going to the park-   the soft grass to seek;
a girl wanted to help 'cause he was hurt,
she thought him handsome although full of dirt.
Coming close she offered him-   her dessert,
sitting beside him she began to speak.

He growled a savage growl showing his teeth,
but the girl could see the good dog beneath;
she reached out to touch his wound and he cried,
without fear she picked him up - and he sighed.
She hugs him and tells how he almost died,
he snuggles close-   his new toys underneath.

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August 5, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Once A Pet
Copyright Protected, ID -18-1049-780-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Feral
sponsor, Anthony Slausen

Eighth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Oh this an amazing story! Congratulations on your win. Sad, scary, heartbreaking, and sweet and inspiring. A fav for me.
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 8:33 AM
What a beautiful penned story, Dear Heart. Very touching and beautiful.
Haight Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 3:03 PM
I love your feral dog story, Dear Heart, especially the ending. Very well done, and congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 7:26 AM
A happy ending to a ferocious story, well done, Constance:)
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 9:21 PM
wow, this is so poignant, Constance. I did not write for this contest. I really like what you came up with, the tender side of feral. Soupmail.
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:37 PM
A beautiful poem with a wonderful ending, I enjoyed it very much!
Sergi Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 6:37 PM
aA great challenge and done very well! My compliments!
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