Once a Garden

Once a garden dared to grow,
Despite the heat; despite the snow.
It paid no mind to wind, or rain,
And every spring would grow again.
Then came the spring it did not grow—
No one knew the reason, though.
Some said the garden was too old;
Still others blamed it on the cold.
But I believe it lost the will
To tend the rose, or the daffodil.
Loneliness, I believe is why—
For a garden needs a passerby.
It needs someone to smile and say:
“How glad I am I passed this way!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/11/2019 8:26:00 AM
So well expressed, congrats on your win.
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 9/11/2019 12:59:00 PM
Hi Richard, and thank you so much! Happy you stopped by, and thank you for the congratulations. All the best ~ Ken
Date: 9/11/2019 7:58:00 AM
A FAVE for me, Kenneth. Bravo on your win.
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 9/11/2019 1:01:00 PM
I appreciate that more than you know, and sincerely— thank you! Have a wonderful day ~ Ken
Date: 9/11/2019 3:44:00 AM
What a lovely little poem!) flowed perfectly!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/11/2019 3:16:00 PM
The pleasure of winning!;) the glory if you will!;)
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 9/11/2019 1:17:00 PM
And an odd question, but what did I win? I haven’t figured out this site quite yet. Thanks, Brenda ~ Ken
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 9/11/2019 1:10:00 PM
Hi Brenda, and thank you so much! Have a magical day ~ Ken
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/11/2019 3:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
Date: 8/18/2019 10:37:00 AM
everything, everyone needs love to grow, love the metaphor in this one...you should look at some of the contests and consider entering some...you have a nice style! :) enjoyed this one!
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 9/8/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I’ve been in Orlando doing my Disney thing, but I will look at the contests. Have a magical day, Ken :)
Date: 8/14/2019 10:49:00 PM
Very, very interesting, Kenneth. If you can indulge me a minute: In the Creation account in the Old Testament, note that the vegetation was ready to spring forth on the third day (or perhaps the fourth), but it waited to sprout until the sixth day, when man could till it and admire it... A delightful write! :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2019 9:55:00 AM
Just keep writing. Your poems are great, and you will surely develop a following. Be of faith and good cheer, my friend! Have a wonderful Sunday! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 8/17/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! And I hadn’t thought of that, but that’s an interesting insight...:) km And how does one get there poems read here. I’m not too familiar with this site—you’re the only one who comments, and I appreciate it...
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