Once a Garden

Once a garden dared to grow,
Despite the heat; despite the snow.
It paid no mind to wind, or rain,
And every spring would grow again.
Then came the spring it did not grow—
No one knew the reason, though.
Some said the garden was too old;
Still others blamed it on the cold.
But I believe it lost the will
To tend the rose, or the daffodil.
Loneliness, I believe is why—
For a garden needs a passerby.
It needs someone to smile and say:
“How glad I am I passed this way!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 8:26 AM
So well expressed, congrats on your win.
Merrill  Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 12:59 PM
Hi Richard, and thank you so much! Happy you stopped by, and thank you for the congratulations. All the best ~ Ken
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 7:58 AM
A FAVE for me, Kenneth. Bravo on your win.
Merrill  Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 1:01 PM
I appreciate that more than you know, and sincerely— thank you! Have a wonderful day ~ Ken
Chiri Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:44 AM
What a lovely little poem!) flowed perfectly!;)
Chiri Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:16 PM
The pleasure of winning!;) the glory if you will!;)
Merrill  Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 1:17 PM
And an odd question, but what did I win? I haven’t figured out this site quite yet. Thanks, Brenda ~ Ken
Merrill  Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Hi Brenda, and thank you so much! Have a magical day ~ Ken
Chiri Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:45 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
Adams Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 10:37 AM
everything, everyone needs love to grow, love the metaphor in this one...you should look at some of the contests and consider entering some...you have a nice style! :) enjoyed this one!
Merrill  Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I’ve been in Orlando doing my Disney thing, but I will look at the contests. Have a magical day, Ken :)
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Very, very interesting, Kenneth. If you can indulge me a minute: In the Creation account in the Old Testament, note that the vegetation was ready to spring forth on the third day (or perhaps the fourth), but it waited to sprout until the sixth day, when man could till it and admire it... A delightful write! :) gw
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Just keep writing. Your poems are great, and you will surely develop a following. Be of faith and good cheer, my friend! Have a wonderful Sunday! Warm wishes, Gershon
Merrill  Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Thank you, Gershon! And I hadn’t thought of that, but that’s an interesting insight...:) km And how does one get there poems read here. I’m not too familiar with this site—you’re the only one who comments, and I appreciate it...
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