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Once a Bright Star

A bright star shimmers aloft, amid the flimsy stars soft; The Star grins bright, even in the twilight; Fellow stars envy, make the star shies. A nimbus cloud braces mysterious moisture, embraces, the star glittering bright; Bright star loses all the light, mislays its power, can't shine, Now the fellow stars malign. Yearning for the bright sky the poor star desperately cries Will the nimbus cloud budge? Will primeval brightness nudge?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/16/2018 6:29:00 AM
Deep poetry.. so well expressed..
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Date: 12/14/2018 5:55:00 PM
starstruck am i... good one, supraja, ohhh...huggs
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Date: 12/14/2018 10:56:00 AM
Lovely poem..the bright star will shine again..well done, Supraja.
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Date: 12/14/2018 10:47:00 AM
Each... star has its night my dearest, Supraja so what it seems lost for a moment it will return in triumph ! Well done my friend!
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Date: 12/14/2018 9:22:00 AM
Oh, I hope the bright stare re-gains brightness ! Well done :)
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